First of all, I really like Hazel and Finn 
. They are so cute 
also episode three is really made me curious and excited about what’s going to happen next. 
and also, I’d like to read the whole story when you publish it. But there are some parts and dialogs which need to be improved I guess. For example the Hazel’s and her family’s past part. But I really like your plot and coding. There are tiny mistakes with layering and overlay scale but girl we are all human and that’s certainly normal! 
Can’t wait for the other episodes!!! 
And also I can help and improve some parts too if you want