Hey! I have an unpublished four chapter story that I’d really like someone to read through and give me tips on before publishing! In exchange, I’d be more than willing to read through your unpublished/published story for editing/review! I’m not looking for a R4R, because it’s not published yet and I really want the criticism/feedback.
Specifically, I’m looking for someone to read through my entire story (about 15 minutes in total) and give me advice on how engaging it is, if the directing needs to be fixed, and other narratives flaws.
I’m very good with grammar/editing, so I can help you with that!