Beta reader for my first episode

I just finished this. I already love it. There aren’t many episode stories about the real life issues people face. Tge directing is really good. However, I think you should some kind of background music.

I would love to help too!

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thank you!!! and yeah, i add sound effects at the very last minute, right when i’m 100% done with the episode :sob:

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CAN YOU STILL read it?

ofc ! send me the story !

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It’s crazy because the part about dancing actually happened to me my teacher goes you probably can dance and then she goes some people just have that talent I’m 100% sure it’s because I’m black like I can’t dance but ok.

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I can help!!!
I will give you honest opinions and correct grammar and tell u wer its being too cliche!

OKAY THANK YOU!! I’ll pm YOU!!

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