Beta Reader for Unpublished Story?



Hey! It’s @Jahstoriess!
I’m currently writing a story that has 3 completed episodes and I’m looking on some feedback on it and things I can improve on. It’s my first story outside the “fantasy” genre. I wanted to try something new. I’m looking fr someone to just take a quick look over it. All help is appreciated!
If interested pm me or leave a comment below
Thank you!!

Details about Story if interested!

Story Name: Painted in Red
Description(rough): Being an assassin for the government leaves Aria’s heart frozen, but when she gets a job to assassinate a sexy Mafia leader will it begin to defrost?
Genre: Action, Drama? (Debating)


I’ll dop yours if you do mine :grinning:


Sure! Pm me :slight_smile: