Would anyone mind checking out my unpublished story? I would love some feedback, this can be a one time thing. If you are interested comment below.
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Sure.
Just, expect completely honest feedback 
I’m not going to be rude, obviously. But I will point out anything that can be fixed or improved. If that’s all good with you, I’m game.
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I need someone like you, yeah I’ll PM you, don’t worry I won’t take anything personally.
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Okay, good. Because, like I said, I’m not going to be mean… just critical-because that’s what is needed to make sure you’re story is the best you can make Look forward to the PM 
I will have to read it a little later. My son just woke up from his nap!
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Okay, I don’t mind take your time. 
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