Beta reader needed! (story details bellow❤️)

Hiii, guys, I was looking for someone to beta-read my story (for free because I can’t afford paying). No need to check the grammar though, someone’s already doing that for me. I’m writing this story for the DL contest, so I’d like to make it on the best way possible! I’d really appreciate HONEST criticism about on what should I improve (like speechbubbles, overlay and etc). Anyways, here’s the details of my story if you’d like to know:

𝑇𝑖𝑡𝑡𝑙𝑒: The Inn Between
𝐷𝑒𝑠𝑐𝑟𝑖𝑝𝑡𝑖𝑜𝑛: To pay a huge debit, Mare decides to go undercover and become Dylan’s flawless stylist, Diana Davis. But what happens when Dylan meets and falls in love with both of them?
𝐺𝑒𝑛𝑟𝑒: Romance
𝐶ℎ𝑜𝑖𝑐𝑒𝑠: Yes! You’ll have full CC for the MC, the LI, her undercover personality and family members. Also, this story has point system and different outcomes.
𝑆𝑡𝑦𝑙𝑒: Limelight

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I will help with that since i am in the mood to do so haha! send me the link by PM!

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I definetly want to beta read it
cause i dont have any story to read (n my passes r getting wasted)
n plus i :heart: the description :v:t2:

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