Hi! So I recently just wrapped up the first episode of my new story and I would like it to be proofread/tested before I move on to the next chapters.
I would need these beta readers to pay special attention to my use of:
1. Grammar 2. The little details in my directing. 3. Choices 4. NATIVE ENGLISH SPEAKERS WOULD BE HELPFUL BUT NOT NECESSARY!!
FYI: My story would be published in the Fantasy genre so expect such. Thanks and eagerly awaiting!
EDIT If possible, I would definitely appreciate detailed reviews
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Em546
April 11, 2019, 5:10am
#2
I would be happy to do it!! Since I don’t really want to have to review directing (cuz I’m lazy and have high expectations lol) I’ll mostly look for grammar and spelling errors
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Great! Can I send you the link here?
Em546
April 11, 2019, 5:47am
#6
water doesn’t fall that slowly lol (but amazing overlay use!!)
try fading the bg music so it doesn’t sound choppy
love the art scene and the head overlay is sooo well done!!
why is there happyish music?? doesn’t match the mood
your heart overlay has a white outline on it
A hijab does not a Muslim make should be A hijab does not make a muslim.
okay WOWW!! amazing plot line, A+ directing, I AM HOOKED. I’ll def read whenever this comes out
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Sure! The more the merrier
Can’t wait for your feedback!
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Ams007
April 13, 2019, 1:45am
#13
Sorry it took me a couple days to get back to you.
Ditto, I don’t think there’s anything more to add to that. I’ll definitely read it once it’s out.
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system
May 13, 2019, 12:56pm
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