Beta Reading 1st Chapter

Would anybody be down to beta the 1st chapter of my story?

Here’s the link:

A few caveats though:

  • I haven’t done the outfits yet, so the MC will have the same outfit all the way through.
  • No cc, there will be cc in the final version though.
  • Speech bubbles aren’t correct yet, fixing them now.

Let me know what you think!


Hey love
I have been proofreading more than 20 stories now
I do at $1/episode
Feel free to pm me if you are interested
IG - _angryybirdd _

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I’m not going to pay for beta-readers but thank you for replying.

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If you need a free proofreader dm in IG @episodecosmos

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I can beta read it.

I’ll DM you the link

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Moved to Share Feedback since you’re looking for beta-reading. Make sure to check out our Forum Tutorial for more info about creating topics, and feel free to PM me if you’ve got questions. :smiley:


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I can read that!

I can beta read if you’re still up for it

I read it! Was pretty intriguing! However, when she is walking backwards when the police enter, there’s an animation for that.

what do you mean?

@nis.storiesx & @Chocola please do!

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I read your first chapter.

thanks! did you like it?

Hey, so far the storyline is great and the directing is spot on! I didn’t see any glitches or awkward spot directing

Yes, I liked it!

@nis.storiesx thank you for letting me know.

@nis.storiesx @Anna_Marie @Chocola if you read this 1st chapter would you read more?


Definitely! I still want to know what happens next since Quinn got arrested at the ending of the first chapter. It’s such a good cliffhanger!