Bonus Scene Help!

    NARRATOR
You have a choice to access the bonus scene
It contains some slight importance in the future
It is not necessary but, it will help your understanding on the story
Would you like to see the bonus scene?

choice (BonusSceneEpisode1)
GEMS:5"Bonus Scene" {

@AXEL changes into Axel Nude
@CHARIS changes into Charis Nude

@overlay RED BED COVER 1 create
@overlay RED BED COVER 1 opacity 1

@cut to zone 2

@zoom on 0 0 to 100% in 0
@CHARIS spot 0.885 70 81 in zone 2
@CHARIS moves to layer 0
@AXEL spot 0.917 240 183 in zone 2
@AXEL moves to layer 0
@overlay 5170386982731776_RED BED COVER 1 shifts to 0 0 in zone 1
@overlay 5170386982731776_RED BED COVER 1 scales to 1.000 1.000
@overlay 5170386982731776_RED BED COVER 1 moves to layer 1

@CHARIS is sleep_sit_neutral_loop AND AXEL is react_sit_checkphone_bored AND CHARIS faces right AND AXEL faces right

@pan to zone 3

@AXEL walks to spot 0.917 147 195 in zone 3 THEN AXEL is dustoff_neutral_loop

@pause for 3

@AXEL changes into Axel outfit 1

@zoom on 797 362 to 239% in 3

readerMessage Bonus scene: The tranlation of the secret convosation with Axel!

@AXEL is listen_phone_confused

    AXEL (talk_phone_angry_loop)
Yes Boss!

@AXEL is listen_phone_angry_loop

    NARR
Watch your tone Axel
Know who you are talking to

    AXEL (talk_phone_angry_loop)
Remember the time difference here?

@AXEL is listen_phone_angry_loop

    NARR
My apologies boy
Have you found anything yet?

    AXEL (talk_phone_angry_loop)
No boss, I'm still looking for her

@AXEL is listen_phone_angry_loop

    NARR
We need to find her, she's killing her aunt

    AXEL (talk_phone_sad_loop)
Yes I know, I will find her soon Boss

@AXEL is listen_phone_sigh

    NARR
Hurry up my boy

@AXEL is hangup_phone_neutral THEN AXEL is breathe_deep

@zoom on 0 0 to 100% in 3

} “Nope.” {
NARRATOR
No worries!
}

That is my script!

I want it to be a gem choice but it is coming up as a normal choice please help!!

Try like adding GEMS:5

I tried that here i think GEMS:5"Bonus Scene" {

Did u add these two < >

Yep!

image

Hmm that’s odd.

Okay maybe do

These.

NARRATOR
Would you like to view a bonus scene?
choice
“Yes, I want to view it.” !
Put all of your bonus scene content here.
}
“No, skip it please.” {
NARRATOR
Okay!
Continue the rest of your story here, or end it with your
outro.

okiiii

And I also think for the (name of ur choice) I don’t think you put a period

where would I put the period

Also I am supposed to copy and paste your codes cos I did and and it still doesnt work

By any chance can you resend me ur script?

yep!

INT. KIRA - SPLASH

@zoom reset

    NARRATOR (JESS)
You have a choice to access the bonus scene
It contains some slight importance in the future
It is not necessary but, it will help your understanding on the story
Would you like to see the bonus scene?

choice (BonusSceneEpisode2)
GEMS:5"Bonus Scene" {

@AXEL changes into Axel Nude
@CHARIS changes into Charis Nude

@overlay RED BED COVER 1 create
@overlay RED BED COVER 1 opacity 1

@cut to zone 2

@zoom on 0 0 to 100% in 0
@CHARIS spot 0.885 70 81 in zone 2
@CHARIS moves to layer 0
@AXEL spot 0.917 240 183 in zone 2
@AXEL moves to layer 0
@overlay 5170386982731776_RED BED COVER 1 shifts to 0 0 in zone 1
@overlay 5170386982731776_RED BED COVER 1 scales to 1.000 1.000
@overlay 5170386982731776_RED BED COVER 1 moves to layer 1

@CHARIS is sleep_sit_neutral_loop AND AXEL is react_sit_checkphone_bored AND CHARIS faces right AND AXEL faces right

@pan to zone 3

@AXEL walks to spot 0.917 147 195 in zone 3 THEN AXEL is dustoff_neutral_loop

@pause for 3

@AXEL changes into Axel outfit 1

@zoom on 797 362 to 239% in 3

readerMessage Bonus scene: The tranlation of the secret convosation with Axel!

@AXEL is listen_phone_confused

    AXEL (talk_phone_angry_loop)
Yes Boss!

@AXEL is listen_phone_angry_loop

    NARR
Watch your tone Axel
Know who you are talking to

    AXEL (talk_phone_angry_loop)
Remember the time difference here?

@AXEL is listen_phone_angry_loop

    NARR
My apologies boy
Have you found anything yet?

    AXEL (talk_phone_angry_loop)
No boss, I'm still looking for her

@AXEL is listen_phone_angry_loop

    NARR
We need to find her, she's killing her aunt

    AXEL (talk_phone_sad_loop)
Yes I know, I will find her soon Boss

@AXEL is listen_phone_sigh

    NARR
Hurry up my boy

@AXEL is hangup_phone_neutral THEN AXEL is breathe_deep

@zoom on 0 0 to 100% in 3

} “Nope.” {
NARRATOR (JESS)
No worries!
}

NARRATOR (JESS)
You have the choice to access the bonus scene.
It contains some slight importance in the future
It is not necessary but it will help your understanding on the story
Would you like to see the bonus scene?

Choice (bonussceneepisode2)

< GEMS: 5 > “Yes.” {

add whatever is your bonus scene is.

}

“No. Thank you.” {

NARRATOR (JESS)
Okay!

}

You Continue the rest of your story here, or end it with your outro.

Edit: you can rewrite what I wrote and add your stuff to ur script

Ill try it now thank youu!

Hopefully it’ll work :smiling_face_with_tear:

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Ughhhhhhhhhhh It keeps saying error

So I tried getting rid of the INT. RED BEDROOM and it said this

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Sorry I forgot to say after the yes put {

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Try to treat it like a normal choice and add a space and bracket { after the “Yes”

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I have tried let see if it works! :sob:

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