Bonus Scene (I need help to fix it)

INT. ROYAL GUEST ROOM CRAXIS CASTLE CLOSEUP WINDOW - NIGHT
&cut to zone 1
&zoom on 255 307 to 332% in 0
@NOVA changes into Nova_lazy_clothes_with_vein
@NOVA changes eyesColor into Brown Dark
&NOVA faces right AND NOVA spot 1.166 222 15 in zone 1 at layer 3 AND NOVA starts cry_sob_sad_loop
@speechbubble is 166 251 to 100%
NARRATOR
Would you like to see Nova’s P.O.V on blake
NARRATOR
Would you like to support the author?

choice (support_author)
GEMS:5 “Absolutely! 5 Gems for you!” {
NARRATOR
You are amazing! Thank you for your support!
} “No, thank you.” {
NARRATOR
No worries! Thank you for reading!
}
@speechbubble is 172 243 to 100% with tail_top_right
NOVA (cry_sob_sad_loop)
(Our mate is DEAD.)
@zoom on 239 321 to 332% in 0
@NOVA is deepbreath
&NOVA is breathe_deep
@speechbubble is 126 261 to 100% with tail_top_right
NOVA (think_rubchin)
(| color:plum | Willow: We aren’t not alone.)
NOVA (think_rubchin)
(| color:plum | Willow: I can sense | bold , italic |HIM.)
@NOVA is dustoff_neutral_loop
@pause for a beat
@NOVA is draw_gun_angry
@add Gun Pistol Black to NOVA
@speechbubble is 130 206 to 100% with tail_top_right
NOVA (talk_gun_angry)
My wolf can sense you and come out wherever you are.
@transition fade out black in 1
@transition fade out black in 1
@transition fade out black in 1
EXT. BLAKE SEEING NOVA- NIGHT
&NOVA spot 1.166 222 15 in zone 2 AND BLAKE spot 1.166 222 15 in zone 2
@zoom on 0 0 to 100% in 0
readerMessage Thank you @shadow_epi
@speechbubble is 160 280 to 100%
NARRATOR (NOVA)
I can’t believe with my own eyes it was HIM.
@speechbubble is 175 265 to 100%
NARRATOR (NOVA)
I haven’t seen HIM in years.
readerMessage Nova saw Blake on her wedding day
@speechbubble is 166 256 to 100%
NARRATOR (NOVA)
He walked out of the shadow, he was handsome.
@speechbubble is 161 276 to 100%
NARRATOR (NOVA)
Why all people he had to show up and what do he want now?
@zoom on 157 568 to 111% in 0
NARRATOR (NOVA)
He looks very good after four years later.
BLAKE (idle)
Why is mon petit loup looking at me like that?
NOVA (idle)
(Oh bloody hll.)
NOVA (idle)
Ugh Golden boy wasn’t looking at you.
BLAKE (idle)
(Oh mon petit loup feisty I f
cking love it.)
NOVA (idle)
Golden boy, why are you here?
BLAKE (idle)
Aww, no welcome for me.
BLAKE (idle)
Mon petit loup just checking on you.
NOVA (idle)
Really Golden boy that is just lame excuse?
BLAKE (idle)
Deepbreath Fine, I am sorry about JAMES.
@zoom on 178 523 to 169% in 0
NARRATOR (NOVA)
I can’t believe my own eyes what I just heard from Golden boy

what’s the problem? x

In this scene, what if they don’t want read this scene at all?

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You need to add a branch so they can choose to read the bonus scene.
ex
NARRATOR
Would you like to view the bonus scene?
choice
“Yes.”{
#bonus scene here
}
“No.”{
#continue or end story
}

I hope that is what you mean?

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Yes, thank you

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