Bored enough to review and proofread your stories!😂

Okay, since this whole lockdown thing is boring me to death, I’ve decided to proofread and review…I know, I’m shocked as well. Anyways just beware that I tend to be brutally honest…so please don’t get offended by my opinions and criticism. Therefore you may leave your story titles down below! :upside_down_face::wink:


How many episodes are you reviewing?

As many as you need!

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Please do 3 and I can handle the criticism.

Title : Magicka: Awakening Lust
Author : Prettyeri
IG : Eri2.0
Link :
Description : Your reality has slammed into an alluring and mysterious vampire. Now his eyes are set on you. Will Zarian stir your lustful desires? Limelight CC
Cover :

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I would love for you to start reading my story and give me your opinions. Especially at it’s start, it has mature content. If you feel comfortable, I’d love for you to read the first episode and let me know if you like it enough to keep reading!

Name: Don’t Get Caught
Creator name: Salena 2012
Description: Joey and Sophie are enemies who love their partners, but can they hide their relationship or separate before they lose the ones they love or will they end up falling for each other?
5 episodes so far (which took way too long) and a 6th on Monday.

Don't get caught cover

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Can I have a review on my final Episode story?

Title: Dance Party
Author: Karlon Artis
Genre: Drama
Description: Akira Arakaki has been a professional dancer for several years, but a few subpar dance performances make him lose confidence in his talent. Can he restore his confidence?

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Thank you for doing this :blush::heart:
I’d love for you to review my story!
So here is my story:
Author: AnjitaD
Title: Magicka : Master of elements
Genre: Fantasy
Episodes: 3(more coming soon)
Description: Will you and your friends able to save the world from darkness as you uncover secrets back 500 years ago ? ( MC: F, time choices points system, adventure, fantasy, mystery and action )
Style: Limelight
Link :

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Omg I would love some honest feedback :cat_shocked:
The title is I made the devil cry, author Šebule, fantasy. It have 6 chapters And I’m not very confident about it, I would like to discuss it with you afterwards, to talk about my doubts And what you think about it :llama:
Thank you very much!

I’d love a review on my first three chapters, I can handle criticism!

Title - beautiful broken lies
Author - Hannah & Carly
Description - Elena’s life seems perfect. Partying, boys, friends, you name it. That is until a dark tragedy changes her life forever. What is the truth? Will it break her?
Genre - drama

Can you review the first chapter of my unpublished story?
Title- (Queer:) Camp Heimat
Author- Phoenix_Hope
Description- Your parents send you to an anti-LGBT camp to “fix” you over the summer, but is the camp really all it seems? Drama, discrimination, and self-discovery add up to the longest summer of your life…

Hello dear! I would love a review and i can take criticism on it.

Here’s my story deets.
Story Name: Necromancers
Genre: Fantasy
This story is about two siblings who are born as necromancers. Necromancers are people dealing with the dead by using magic. They fight demons and other evil creature so as to maintain peace in the world. They have a life of training but everything starts to turn upside down right after their mother’s death. Unknown things become known. Evil creatures are starting to take over. It’s up to them to handle it this time and they dont know if they are ready for it. Yet they too have personal lives since they are being hunted down by someone and they are in hiding. The one mistake in their past does this all. Will they be able to figure it out and fight the storm that’s coming towards them. Read to find out.

Instagram: @epi.enchantress

title: Pregnant by the bad pregnant robot(?)

description: Love , laughter and drama collide in this wacky adventure with little life lessons along the way. Will the ships survive? Or will you fail to take the crazy? (the plot is memes)

hii!! are you still taking request? i need so bad a proofreader! it would be awesome if u help me in my story it’s currently in 3 episodes. please tell me if you’re still up to help. <33

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Hey are you still doing reviews? :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

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For all of those wondering whether I still take requests or not. Note that I do. I am apologising to those whom I haven’t gave my feedback yet. I had technical difficulties with my internet connection. So I couldn’t reach any of you sooner.

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