Hello!!
I have just published a brand new story called
Dirty Sexy Money
I desperately would like some reads and reviews!
Let me know what you think 
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Hey, are you interested in doing r4r?
Title: Eat Your Heart Out
Author name: F/N
Description: Wishing for an angel to disentangle your life takes a strange turn when an unholy creature appears. Will the love of the enigmatic detective or the lust for a fierce vampire?
Style: Limelight
Episodes: 4 (Ongoing)
Link to story: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5898407973683200
Additional notes: CC, Choices matter, LL.
Instagram: @fnepisode
Hello! I will definitely pop you in my favourites. To be honest I have been let down time and time again for R4Rs in the past so I am wary about them.
But your plot sounds really interesting so I will probably give it a go
I work full time and need to write my stories so can’t guarantee when, but bear with me
Let me know what you think of mine if you read it!
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I’ll read it
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Thank you sooo much
Let me know what you think!
Sure will do.
Dirty Sexy Money By Kira
Runtime 8m 58s
There are several grammatical errors - mainly punctuation. In addition, I find the speech bubble placement distracting. It seems like you left them in their default positions. There is no use of sound or music. Finally, there are some directing errors, including scaling and layers.
However, the plot and characters are interesting. Besides what has been mention, there are no major/deal-breaking errors. It can be quite humorous and enjoyable. So far, I’ve only read episode 1; however, it has a lot of potential.
Every scene after Scene 8 contains grammatical errors, so I didn’t bother creating spoilers to repeat the same thing.
Cover
Beautiful.
Did you make that yourself?
Description
When you you are beautiful, rich and nothing you do has any real consequences, what do you do?? Read this story for scandal, sexiness and very bad decisions…
- Repetition of “you”
- Use the correct singular/plural noun
- Repeated question mark - not an error but…
Without rewording:
When you are beautiful, rich and nothing you do has any real consequence, what do/will you do? Read this story for scandals, sexiness and very bad decisions…
Scene 3: Party
Foreground characters are expected to be larger than background characters.
Are the characters waving their hands supposed to be in unison?
As the camera pans, characters cut into their animation.
There is a pause before zooming off of the male character.
Scene 4: St Lavish High
If you are using American English, St should have a full stop. If you are using British English, then it doesn’t need one.
Scene 5
The speech bubble placement is distracting.
You forgot a full stop at the end of a sentence.
When EDWARD and FELICICY exit, their parents are stuck in their previous posts, which look unnatural.
When the parents kiss, make CHARLES walk over before starting the animation. Otherwise he just jumps there.
Scene 7: St Lavish High
- Layering is off
- Missing Full Stops
Scene 8: Outside the Principal's Office
When EDWARD, FELCITY and PRINCIPAL POWER walk in, they start from the same spot. Spot them in different places prior to them walking onscreen.
- Missing Punctuation - commas and full stops.
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Thanks soo much for such a detailed review! Really doesn’t matter how many times you check over it, you can still miss so much haha
Hope you liked the story, despite the grammatical errors!
Also, yes I am British. But I might add the full stop just so it doesn’t bug readers!
Hey there! Wanna r4r with me?
My story is
Hey.
This is my first ever story on episode. 
I would love to have honest reviews tho. 
And if you want to do r4r I’m up. (3*3)
Name: The Princess of Light
Genre: Fantasy
Chapters released: 3 (more coming soon)
Style: Limelight
Instagram: @priya.episodestorys
Link:
The Best Stories Are Worth Sharing: The Princess of Light
Checkout this story, on the Episode App! If you like it, support the story by passing it along!
(Yes i have 2 story covers 
)
Both small and large cover by @KylieJay
Sure, if you read my story, I will read yours
Just let me know when you have started!
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Sure, if you read my story, I will read yours
Just let me know when you have started.
I may contact your friend for a cover, because yours are lovely!
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Started ep.1 rn, but out of passes
my story
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Oh I mode definitely did. They’re not a deal breaker for everyone. I just happen to always spot them, and sometimes I hate that. 
On a positive note, I had nothing bad to comment on your plot or characters themselves. As someone who is the total opposite to ROXIE, I found her character interesting and quite funny. I realised that I only mentioned the negative things, and it can seem quite harsh. But trust me, there’s a lot more positives.
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Ah brilliant so glad that you enjoyed it.
Roxie is a cow haha but I love writing her lines.
I do like writing as sassy females, but she is worse!
I will make the corrections today and carry on with ep4
Thanks! Your story is next on my list
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Heyy, you can try my story as well
Story: Avery was basically locked up her whole life, forced to be the perfect daugher. But one day her dad gives her a deal - uncontrolled freedom and a dream job in exchange for remaining ”perfect”. How hard could it be to stay the same when you’ve been like this your whole life? Turns out it’s way harder when there’s an arrogant guy who always ends up crossing your path…
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That sounds really good! Looking forward to reading it 
I will pop you in my favourites and give it a read after you send over a screen shot of mine
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