Brutal honest feedbacks on my cover

So I did this cover request for @CholeBlack and I need feedbacks


I like how you shaded the arms, but since this is brutal lol I guess you made the lips too big and the eyes are good but the eyelashes are too in one side and look a bit off i think you should not make a strainght line you should like curve it idk if you get me lol and the nose, iI think should be seen more. You could have made the clothes have more like detail try shading them too


some of the hair behind her hair isnt coloured or is transparent. maybe make the lines thicker unless you were going for lineless art.the lips are kinda pig, make them smaller. try adding shading. however this is a really good piece


The eyelashes look a bit weird, and I agree that the lips look a bit big.