Brutal Review Thread 😐

[Xea]

1. I don’t mean to insult anyone, this only for improvement and growth for your story.
2. I will only read one chapter.
3. The best you can get is a 200
4. I will grade on Transition, Custom Backgrounds, Intro, and Story Plot.

[Xea]

Transition: 7/25
Custom Backgrounds: 24/25
Intro: 23/25
Story Plot: 17/25
Spot Directing: 23/25

96/200

[Talu]

Im not sure how that’s out of 200?

[Talu]

Story: Chasing Sparks LL
Genre: romance
Author: Talu
Description: When Noa starts college, all she’s looking for is an education, but Evan, the undeniably good looking frat boy down the street, has different plans.

The Best Stories Are Worth Sharing: Chasing Sparks (Limelight)

[Danielle318]

Story titile:
Clue: My parents murder!
Episodes: 2(in the middle of editing 2)
Author: @Danielle318
Description: Emily family is complicated. Very completed. With her dad leaving the family and mom well… Anyway, Emily gets a necklace from her aunt. Then when she turns 16 she learns that her family is VERY broken and messed up. How many secrets can one family hide?
By the way…when you are grading my story can you tell me what I did wrong and give me the numbers? Then I can see what I need to improve on. And make it better.

[Danielle318]

Heres the link:

The Best Stories Are Worth Sharing: Clue: My parent's murder

[Danielle318]

Actually, it is 94.

[karthika11]

You are the princess of “MERMAID WORLD”. You have a wedding arrangement with a bad prince who you hate. If you do not marry by the age of 18 “YOU’LL DIE”. Can you find true love?

The Best Stories Are Worth Sharing: A MERMAID'S LOVE

[Xea]

I added something extra for her.

[Xea]

Transition: 4/50
Custom Backgrounds: 12/50
Intro: 7/50
Story Plot: 4/50

Total Score
27/200

[LaurelleE27]

What I think Talu meant was:
25+25+25+25+25 is 125
So, where are the other 75 points?

Also, if someone doesn’t have an intro or custom backgrounds, do they get 0 respectively.

[Talu]

Oh, each out of 50 makes sense.

[JannahJackson]

My story: © Tribe of Malapinchi
Author: Jannah Jackson
Genre: Thriller/Mystery/Horror/Fantasy/Adventure
Description: Toss into a land of the sun, magic, lies and dark secrets in Asia. Can you survive, solve the havoc and save everyone before it’s too late? CharacterCustomization
Episodes: 6/7
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5909308359180288

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[C.W.Kingston]

Hey! Would love your review on my story

Author: C.W.Kingston
Instagram: c.w.kingston
Title: And Remember
Episodes: 7 (and more)
Style: Ink
Genre: Romance
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5630609166761984

Description: They say that if you truly love someone, the whole universe will conspire to bring you to them. Will it? For Matt and Ravina?!

[2c67e84e97b44cc5bbd3]

This is my first one so its not really perfect one, hope you enjoy it
Title -Love Pill
Episode author - Flo
Description - When he was lost in the world of pain, she came into his life and became his love pills
Link - http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4526048392052736
Genre - Romance
Style - Limelight
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Episodes - 4 episodes

I am really happy to share it with you.

[Geegtfo]

I would LOVE a review !

Story Name - Beyond Repair
Instagram - giana.epi
Author - Giana
Genre - Romance
Episodes - 3
Summary - After a tragic accident Lola leaves her hometown hoping to find herself again, but she finds someone else instead, Is Lola capable of love or if she broken beyond repair?
Style - Ink
Link- http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4518274726690816
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[Maya6]

I would love a review for the limelight version of my story

Title: The Star Necklace

Description: you are the most rich girl in your country in addition you’re famous but what happens when the Star Necklace uncovers your true identity

[Maya6]

The Best Stories Are Worth Sharing: The Star Necklace (Limelight)