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#1

I’ve been playing Episode for about 3 years. (2015-2018) I’ve read from comedy to horror. I’ve currently got a lot of time on my hands, so I’d love to review some stories! All I ask for return is a thanks :heart:
If you want me to review your story, here is a form! Also note this is not first come, first serve, i’ll be doing the story i want to read. (I will give everyone a review though!)

copy and paste this form and fill in!

Author:
Story:
Description:
Genre:
Cover:
Link:

I hope that you’ll fill in the form and reply to this topic. Hope I can help! The review will be finished in a minimum of 2 hour or maximum of a week :heart:


#2

Can I ask for 2 ?


#3

Author: Mary-P
Story: Crazy News
Description: THIS is not a story.
Genre: ? Comedy ?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5430872027955200


#4

sure!


#5

Yes \o/

Author: Mary-P
Story: Music in our hearts
Description: You’re a straight A student with a passion for art but don’t have any talent. When a mysterious voice leads you to 3 Muses of the Mythology, magic offers you a new perspective.
Genre: Fantasy
Link:


#6

Author: Dr.Smile
Story: The Pregnancy Curse
Description: Being the bad boy always seems like fun and games, but for every action, there is an equal and opposite reaction. Too bad Tristan Stuart realized this way too late. [Male MC]
Genre: Comedy
Cover:
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Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6624440286052352


#7

Thank you so much for creating this thread.:slight_smile:
Here’s my story:
Author: S_Unique
Title: The Four Horsemen
Genre: Fantasy
Style: Ink
Description: 4 Sins. 4 Angels fell. 4 Horsemen rose. A curse was casted. And the battle of good vs evil is about to begin. CC/ Choices matter
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5482099054608384


#8

Hello @epysky I would like to receive a review, please.

Can I receive my review through PM? :thinking:

Story title: Rewinded life.

Author name: Lia Lopez.

Description:
What would you do if a galactic being gives you the power to go back and change situations that escapes from your hands?

Genre: Fantasy, comedy, romance, life.

Episodes: 6 (Ongoing - Working on chapter 7.)

Link:


#9

Do you review unpublished stories?


#10

𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙥𝙧𝙚𝙜𝙣𝙖𝙣𝙘𝙮 𝙘𝙪𝙧𝙨𝙚 𝙗𝙮 𝙙𝙧.𝙨𝙢𝙞𝙡𝙚
(@Dr.Smile07)
this is all my opinion!!

first impressions

cover: the cover in my opinion looks good. The font is also okay, except for the “curse” one, it may mislead people thinking the baby is a demon or something
name The name of the story is really intriguing.
description I love the description!

chapter one
  • the intro is really good! I love how it introduces the characters names, but doesn’t give you other info
  • where the MC wakes up in their bed, I find a bit cliche.
  • I wonder which girl I slept with last night." That dialogue doesn’t give me a good impression of Tristan, as it makes him sound like an asshole.
  • the stink breath overlay I love that! It makes it funny for me lmao.
  • “Kicking bitches out of my bedroom is fun.” I’m sorry, but I already hate the MC.
  • Jenny Lian is a mood
  • I find the scene at breakfast really funny! It makes the family likeable.
  • “I hate your life too” Ok relateable
  • I love that some choices have an impact! It makes me feel like the choices aren’t useless.
  • I honestly dont like Tristan.
  • You can clearly see you used the randomizer for the BG chars. Try changing some of them (It’s a small detail, so it doesn’t really make me change my opinion about the story.
  • THAT CENSORED OVERLAY HAS BE WOWZERS
  • The pauses where the MC walks in is a bit long, try changing it!
  • Ok, Tristan is really egotistical.
  • Carmela is honestly really likable.
  • That scene at the “lie” choice really makes me interested!
  • Im just hating the MC more and more.
  • I ship Sanjay and Carmela so much
  • The cliffhanger is good, but I find it predictable.
  • I love that there is bonus scenes!
choices
  • I find nothing wrong with the choices, but maybe try making some choices where the reader doesn’t know if it does have an effect?
summary
  • I’ll be continuing reading this story, cause I find it interesting!
  • The only concern I have is that Tristan is HIGHLY unlikable.
  • if you want me to review Chapter two, just ask me and follow me on my instagram (epysky and epysummer) It’d help alot!

ʀᴇᴡɪᴇᴠ ғɪɴɪsʜᴇᴅ!
:black_heart::black_heart::black_heart:


#11

yep!


#12

Great… I’ll send you the link to my story :eyes:


#13

I’ve just started, so there are only 3 Episodes. (but I’ve got the 4th one already done and the 5th one is almost done, so I’m really working on it)
Author: Dreamer
Story: Dreams and Nightmares
Description: Scarlet had a rough past and it looks like it’s not getting better after she was bought by some mysterious guy. Will she ever turn her life from a nightmare to a dream?
Genre: Romance
Cover:


Link:


#14

Hi @epysky, thank you for doing this! I would love it if you read and gave me some feedback on my two stories! :hugs:

Soccer Moms: Blast to the Future

Story Title: Soccer Moms: Blast to the Future
Author Name: Winter05 with Episode Royalty
Customization?: Limited
Style: INK
Genre: Drama
Episodes: 6 [COMPLETE]
Story Description: All it takes is one shot to change your whole life. Win or lose, nothing will ever be the same.
Instagram Names: @winter05.episode with @penroyalty
Story Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6395210318086144

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Quiet Confidence

Story title: Quiet Confidence
Author’s Name: Winter05 with S.Dsana
Genre: Drama
Story style: INK
Description of the story: People don’t talk to you, but not because of your status. What will happen when a billionaire sets his eyes on you to take you to the top?
Number of episodes: 3 [ONGOING]
Instagrams: @winter05.episode with @princesssana_sa
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4942036682014720
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Feel free to leave me fanmail! I hope you enjoy it!

~ Winter :snowflake:


#15

Author: Anonymous Author
Story: Hale Huna
Description: Kendall’s dad decides to move her and her brothers to Hawaii. She soon discovers she has the key to a world beyond her imagination…and secrets about who her mother really is…
Genre: Fantasy/Romance
Cover: cover
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5002839252664320
Please keep in mind:
-This story contains strong language and mature themes and tackles real life situations such as mental illness and sexual abuse, however it is not a big focus, more of a back story.
-I am waiting on my own backgrounds and personal splashes to be reviewed

Thanks a lot!


#16

Hello, thank you so much for the thread! :grinning: :sob:
Author: Erica Jane
Story: Best friends forever
Description: 3 long-lasting best friends meet together again, and they welcome a 4th best friend in their group. Together, they face challenges in their teen life.
customization
Cover:


Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6648217396969472


#17

I’m glad you hate him because that’s what I was trying to achieve lol. I’ll consider adding a choice in which you don’t know if it affects the story or not. I’ll follow you on instagram and thanks for the review.


#18

If you want to check out my story, that’d be lit :stuck_out_tongue: lmao
Here are the deets!

Author: goth.gaia
Story: From This Day Forward
Description: After your disastrous wedding day, you decide to start fresh: new city, new you, no drama- or so you hoped. Will you say “I do” to the chaos or leave it at the altar? CC
Genre: Drama
Cover: credit to @epi.alyssaa for creating the small and large covers for this story! :sparkling_heart:
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Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5073385564536832

Thank you! :sparkles:


#19

Thanks for creating this thread! I`d love to get a review.
Story title: Let the demon inside
Author: Nierido
Genre: Supernatural romance
Description: You have to move back to Dimwood. What will you find there? Love, death or supernatural friends?
Number of episodes:5
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4876381520789504


#20

@Nierido @goth.gaia @Erica_Jane @AnonymousAuthor1 @WinterMoon05 @RainbowCat @TheTurtleTrainer @LiaLopez @S_Unique @Mary-P thank you all for replying to this thread! I’ll try to review all of these stories but for now ill be closing it! :heart: