Brutally Honest Reviews!

I’ve been playing Episode for about 3 years. (2015-2018) I’ve read from comedy to horror. I’ve currently got a lot of time on my hands, so I’d love to review some stories! All I ask for return is a thanks :heart:
If you want me to review your story, here is a form! Also note this is not first come, first serve, i’ll be doing the story i want to read. (I will give everyone a review though!)

copy and paste this form and fill in!


I hope that you’ll fill in the form and reply to this topic. Hope I can help! The review will be finished in a minimum of 2 hour or maximum of a week :heart:


Can I ask for 2 ?

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Author: Mary-P
Story: Crazy News
Description: THIS is not a story.
Genre: ? Comedy ?


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Yes \o/

Author: Mary-P
Story: Music in our hearts
Description: You’re a straight A student with a passion for art but don’t have any talent. When a mysterious voice leads you to 3 Muses of the Mythology, magic offers you a new perspective.
Genre: Fantasy

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Author: Dr.Smile
Story: The Pregnancy Curse
Description: Being the bad boy always seems like fun and games, but for every action, there is an equal and opposite reaction. Too bad Tristan Stuart realized this way too late. [Male MC]
Genre: Comedy

Thank you so much for creating this thread.:slight_smile:
Here’s my story:
Author: S_Unique
Title: The Four Horsemen
Genre: Fantasy
Style: Ink
Description: 4 Sins. 4 Angels fell. 4 Horsemen rose. A curse was casted. And the battle of good vs evil is about to begin. CC/ Choices matter

Hello @epysky I would like to receive a review, please.

Can I receive my review through PM? :thinking:

Story title: Rewinded life.

Author name: Lia Lopez.

What would you do if a galactic being gives you the power to go back and change situations that escapes from your hands?

Genre: Fantasy, comedy, romance, life.

Episodes: 6 (Ongoing - Working on chapter 7.)


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Do you review unpublished stories?

𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙥𝙧𝙚𝙜𝙣𝙖𝙣𝙘𝙮 𝙘𝙪𝙧𝙨𝙚 𝙗𝙮 𝙙𝙧.𝙨𝙢𝙞𝙡𝙚
this is all my opinion!!

first impressions

cover: the cover in my opinion looks good. The font is also okay, except for the “curse” one, it may mislead people thinking the baby is a demon or something
name The name of the story is really intriguing.
description I love the description!

chapter one
  • the intro is really good! I love how it introduces the characters names, but doesn’t give you other info
  • where the MC wakes up in their bed, I find a bit cliche.
  • I wonder which girl I slept with last night." That dialogue doesn’t give me a good impression of Tristan, as it makes him sound like an asshole.
  • the stink breath overlay I love that! It makes it funny for me lmao.
  • “Kicking bitches out of my bedroom is fun.” I’m sorry, but I already hate the MC.
  • Jenny Lian is a mood
  • I find the scene at breakfast really funny! It makes the family likeable.
  • “I hate your life too” Ok relateable
  • I love that some choices have an impact! It makes me feel like the choices aren’t useless.
  • I honestly dont like Tristan.
  • You can clearly see you used the randomizer for the BG chars. Try changing some of them (It’s a small detail, so it doesn’t really make me change my opinion about the story.
  • The pauses where the MC walks in is a bit long, try changing it!
  • Ok, Tristan is really egotistical.
  • Carmela is honestly really likable.
  • That scene at the “lie” choice really makes me interested!
  • Im just hating the MC more and more.
  • I ship Sanjay and Carmela so much
  • The cliffhanger is good, but I find it predictable.
  • I love that there is bonus scenes!
  • I find nothing wrong with the choices, but maybe try making some choices where the reader doesn’t know if it does have an effect?
  • I’ll be continuing reading this story, cause I find it interesting!
  • The only concern I have is that Tristan is HIGHLY unlikable.
  • if you want me to review Chapter two, just ask me and follow me on my instagram (epysky and epysummer) It’d help alot!

ʀᴇᴡɪᴇᴠ ғɪɴɪsʜᴇᴅ!


Great… I’ll send you the link to my story :eyes:

I’ve just started, so there are only 3 Episodes. (but I’ve got the 4th one already done and the 5th one is almost done, so I’m really working on it)
Author: Dreamer
Story: Dreams and Nightmares
Description: Scarlet had a rough past and it looks like it’s not getting better after she was bought by some mysterious guy. Will she ever turn her life from a nightmare to a dream?
Genre: Romance


Hi @epysky, thank you for doing this! I would love it if you read and gave me some feedback on my two stories! :hugs:

Soccer Moms: Blast to the Future

Story Title: Soccer Moms: Blast to the Future
Author Name: Winter05 with Episode Royalty
Customization?: Limited
Style: INK
Genre: Drama
Episodes: 6 [COMPLETE]
Story Description: All it takes is one shot to change your whole life. Win or lose, nothing will ever be the same.
Instagram Names: @winter05.episode with @penroyalty
Story Link:


Quiet Confidence

Story title: Quiet Confidence
Author’s Name: Winter05 with S.Dsana
Genre: Drama
Story style: INK
Description of the story: People don’t talk to you, but not because of your status. What will happen when a billionaire sets his eyes on you to take you to the top?
Number of episodes: 3 [ONGOING]
Instagrams: @winter05.episode with @princesssana_sa

Feel free to leave me fanmail! I hope you enjoy it!

~ Winter :snowflake:

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Author: Anonymous Author
Story: Hale Huna
Description: Kendall’s dad decides to move her and her brothers to Hawaii. She soon discovers she has the key to a world beyond her imagination…and secrets about who her mother really is…
Genre: Fantasy/Romance
Cover: cover
Please keep in mind:
-This story contains strong language and mature themes and tackles real life situations such as mental illness and sexual abuse, however it is not a big focus, more of a back story.
-I am waiting on my own backgrounds and personal splashes to be reviewed

Thanks a lot!

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Hello, thank you so much for the thread! :grinning: :sob:
Author: Erica Jane
Story: Best friends forever
Description: 3 long-lasting best friends meet together again, and they welcome a 4th best friend in their group. Together, they face challenges in their teen life.


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I’m glad you hate him because that’s what I was trying to achieve lol. I’ll consider adding a choice in which you don’t know if it affects the story or not. I’ll follow you on instagram and thanks for the review.

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If you want to check out my story, that’d be lit :stuck_out_tongue: lmao
Here are the deets!

Author: goth.gaia
Story: From This Day Forward
Description: After your disastrous wedding day, you decide to start fresh: new city, new you, no drama- or so you hoped. Will you say “I do” to the chaos or leave it at the altar? CC
Genre: Drama
Cover: credit to @epi.alyssaa for creating the small and large covers for this story! :sparkling_heart:


Thank you! :sparkles:

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Thanks for creating this thread! I`d love to get a review.
Story title: Let the demon inside
Author: Nierido
Genre: Supernatural romance
Description: You have to move back to Dimwood. What will you find there? Love, death or supernatural friends?
Number of episodes:5

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@Nierido @goth.gaia @Erica_Jane @AnonymousAuthor1 @WinterMoon05 @RainbowCat @TheTurtleTrainer @LiaLopez @S_Unique @Mary-P thank you all for replying to this thread! I’ll try to review all of these stories but for now ill be closing it! :heart: