Brutally Honest Story Reviews 4 Slots Open


You obviously already know what this is going to be about so I will skip the intro and get right into it

- Storyline/Plot: How engaging is your storyline? Is the plot good? Does it have potential to enthrall and engross readers?

- Grammar/Syntax: How good is your grammar? I understand English is not the first language of many Episode readers, but since the stories are in English, your grammar and syntax must be excellent in order to keep people reading.

- Directing/Spot Directing/Zooms/Layering: How good is your directing? Do you use advanced spot directing, and if so, how well do you use it? Is it executed properly? Are the characters at the correct spots and are they layered properly? This is a make or break thing when it comes to stories. People will stop reading if your directing isn’t good.

- Story Title/Cover/Description: This is EXTREMELY important. I will be judging you on this, because every other reader will be judging you on this. Everyone judges a book (or story) by its cover. It may seem unfair, but it’s the truth. Is your story title engaging? Is your cover attention-grabbing? Does your description have perfect grammar and does it entice the reader to click your story?

- Chapter Length: Are you chapters the appropriate length? (Roughly 10-20 minutes) Do your chapters end in the correct place, story-wise? Does it make the reader want more? Are readers wasting a pass on your 5 minute chapter? These are all important questions! You have to give the reader a substantial amount of story in each chapter. They should feel satisfied after every chapter, and they should want to read more.

Character Appearance: Do you offer CC? If you don’t, you’d better have a good reason why! It’s harder to get reads if you don’t offer customization, and there should be a VERY specific reason as to why customization is not an option. How good is your CC template? Do you offer ALL the features? I will be judging you on this.

Character Quality: How interesting are your characters? Over the course of the story, is there character development or do your characters act the same way all the time? Is your MC likable, relatable or at least interesting? Is your love interest a likable person as well? If there is no love story, then I will focus on platonic/family relationships. How do you develop these relationships with your writing?

Choices: Do you offer choices throughout your story? Do the choices impact the story? I understand that they might not within the first three episodes. But choices make a story SO much more interesting and they make readers feel like their opinion actually matters.

Music: Do you use music in your story? Even if you prefer stories with no sound, you should use music for those readers who like their stories with sound. If you don’t use music, your story will be less likely to succeed. How well do you use music - do your scenes fit the sounds that you use?

Speech Bubbles:

  • Do the speech bubbles cover the characters’ faces? Do they indicate that the correct person is speaking? Are they the correct size and in the right spot?

Additional things I will judge that will not affect your story score:

FANMAIL: Are you responsive and courteous to your fans? Remember that without them your story wouldn’t have any exposure. I don’t like reading stories written by bratty authors. This won’t affect your story score, but it will affect people’s perception of you


1.) Do NOT spam this thread. ONE post is sufficient for me to read your story. If you post more than once or get pushy, I will ignore you and move on to the next person. Please be patient.

2.) Please try to be courteous and don’t be rude to me or anyone else participating.

3.) Again, be patient. It may take me a few days to get to your review.

4.) Understand that my review is NOT personal. I am simply trying to help you improve your story.

5.) If you improve your story and then want me to re-review it, please make a note of your improvements before posting a second time.

6.) Do NOT post Your Story if 5/5 slots are in the title don’t post your stories, wait until it’s 4/5 or something in the like.

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  2. PM me if you don’t like my review and would like to discuss some things!


Would You Like A Cover If Your Name Is Drawn?

*NOTES: I enter your names into a drawing if you would like to have a new cover for your story. (Explained Later)

Thanks, and I hope to read many great stories soon!


For the drawing of the cover it’s every two weeks that it takes place. I enter your name into a drawing and if the app selects your name you get a cover! I will also give you a shoutout on insta if you’d like! If you would like 1 additional entry please read my story and pm me a picture of the end of the episode, (only 1 episode)



I would love to!

Genre: Adventure/Fantasy/Comedy (If that makes sense)
Title: Save Me, Hero!
Author: Turtle Cat!
Plot/Summary: After powerless Hero moves from a town where everyone has superpowers, she gets kidnapped by a group of fugitives who are forcing her to join them. What will she do?
Style: Ink
This story has 4 episodes.



Thank you! I am currently in McDonald’s drive through but will read as soon as I finish eating!


Oooo. Get me some fries!:joy:
I’m fine to wait however long it takes. Please read all 3 episodes if you don’t mind!


Girl, I’d love a brutally honest review haha. These always help me grow.


Actually I already reviewed your story when @Itz_Madison made her topic, would you like me to post that and enter you for the drawing of a new cover? And if you don’t want a cover you can win a chance for a shoutout my insta?


Hi! I’d be more than happy if you’ll be able to review my story. Thanks!

Title: Fallen Angel
Author: AdyElly
Chapters: 6 (more coming soon)
Genre: Drama/Mistery
Style: INK (partial CC)

Link to my story:


Hi! Would like a review! :blush:
Author: sophiesophilatte
Genre: Action
Would You Like A Cover If Your Name Is Drawn? Sure!
Note: I got my story proofread in terms of grammar and already made the changes but haven’t updated the story yet.

Thank you! :bowing_woman:t2:


Title: Dreamer
Author: Dreams and Nightmares

Genre: Romance
Would You Like A Cover If Your Name Is Drawn? Not sure, probably not, I like my cover, but if you think it looks bad, then yes :joy:

Thanks for doing this!


I would love a chance of a shoutout please and thanks so much :heartbeat:


I dont really get Point 6 though… meaning until chapters are finish published?

Wait nvm. I got it. I’ll wait until 4/5 slot is open again :grin:


This is good…I need improvement, Thanks

Title: The Black Prince
Author: Story

Genre: Romance Comedy
Plot : Maxwell is 3rd year, everyone knows him already. He likes hurt girls that the girl who tries enticing on him. Jade hates the guy who hurt girls the most and trying revenge on him.
Style : Ink (Comic book art style)
Episode: 6 (ongoing)


Thank you in advance for reading and review :heart:

Name: Law, Order & Love

Victoria, a promising graduate, gets a job at prestigious law firm. Though she is haunted by the ghosts of her past. Will she be able to fight her ghosts and also win cases?

Chapters : 6 (ongoing)

Genre: Drama/Romance

Style: Limelight



Hey, thank you for creating this thread. I would love a review.:slight_smile:
Title:The Four Horsemen
Author: S_Unique

Genre: Fantasy
Would You Like A Cover If Your Name Is Drawn? No thank you :slight_smile:


I would like to be judged. Thank you in advance.
Title: Created By Darkness
Author: Demon Buttercup
Plot: Daryl, a 15 year old girl struggles with relationships with her family and friends. What will happen when tragedy strikes? Will she be strong or choose a darker path? Limited CC
Genre: Drama
Style: Ink
# of Episodes: 7


I would for you to revieuw my story.
I know there are grammar mistakes but I’m working on that.
My story: Trust the Love
Author: Misslibra
Title: Trust the Love
Instagram: misslibra3582
Genre: Romance (and a little comedy, too.)
Style: Ink
Trusting in love is easier said than done.
Stubborn Cassie and serious Jackson find themself is the battle of finding true love
Go along with this intense and impactful love story.



This is awesome! I need brutal honesty lmao

Title: Living Among The Dead
Author: Eva.T

Genre: Adventure
Would You Like A Cover If Your Name Is Drawn?: No, it’s okay :sunny:


Moved to Share Feedback since this is for reviews. Make sure to check out our Forum Tutorial for more info about where to correctly create topics, and feel to ask me if there are any questions. :wink:


Title: Search for love
Author: S.writes

Genre: Drama