Really honest story reviews! :) (closed becouse I'm not on often)

sounds soo greatt :stuck_out_tongue:

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Thanks :blush:

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no preblemo :joy::heart:

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Tittle: MC: The Bar on 23rd
Author: Dr.Smile
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My story - Betting on a Double by Kalani Santino.
What happens when a teenager impersonates a dangerous criminal & gets his friends and himself into trouble with the wrong people… can he save himself & his friends?

would love a review thank you :slight_smile:

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Moved to Share Feedback since this is for story reviews. Make sure to check out our Forum Tutorial for more info about where to correctly create topics, and feel to PM me if there are any questions. :wink:

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Title: One Day
Author: Ellie
Genre: Romance
Style: Limelight
Description: Best friends since the day they were born and when it comes to love, Its always been everyone but each other. They couldn’t possibly be meant to be, could they?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6039287297015808

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I would love to hear what you think and what I can improve on :slight_smile: thank you!

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Story name Vip Brother:Love is…
Authors name Megz_episode
Episodes 4
Instagram name megz_episode7997
How many episode you want me to review 4 are enough
Description A story about 16 celebrities who enter the house of Big Brother uder 24/7 surveillance for 2 months to win the prize of 500 000$, but before that they have to go through all challenges of Big Brother.
I would like you to promote my story.
Style LL
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Link http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4977128782561280
So here’s my story feel free to read it. I’ll be waiting for feedback.

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Please Read :blush:

Here’s a description of my new story:
Title : Figures
Genre : Romance
Episodes : 3 (more soon)
Summary : Bianca just moved from Italy to Manhattan to escape her horrible foster family and her dreadful past. There in Manhatthan she meets a fascinating green eyed man. Will her life be the same or will her past catch up?
Style : Limelight (I will create a INK version too)
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5720682964516864

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My story: © Tribe of Malapinchi
Author: Jannah Jackson
Genre: Thriller/Mystery/Horror/Fantasy/Adventure
Description: Toss into a land of the sun, magic, lies and dark secrets in Asia. Can you survive, solve the havoc and save everyone before it’s too late? CharacterCustomization
Episodes: 5/6
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5909308359180288

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I do this too! Lol

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it’s so fun to do :joy::joy:

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I also notice that a lot of authors are from Europe and a lot don’t speak proper English. I love being able to help then with their grammar.

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It also gives me a good opportunity to find new stories.

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@megsx3 yes that’s true! i’m from europe myself so grammer problems aren’t the best thing to comment on for me :smiley:

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If you’ve ever written anything I’m your gal!

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I’d like to know your honest thoughts about my story! :blush:

Title: Delinquent
Author: Josca Denise
Chapters: 3 (more episodes coming soon)
Description: You’re the lead singer in a world famous band. One day all hell breaks loose as an unknown girl steals your bag and you involuntarily get sucked into the criminal circuit.
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Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5263167807094784
Style: Limelight
Genre: Action, accompanied by romance, drama & comedy.
Specifics: Male MC, CC & choose your sexuality.

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Here’s my story🤗:
Title: POISONED LIPS
Author: Bernice J (@jbernice.episode)
Genre: Thriller
No. of episodes: 8 (more coming soon)
Summary: Lucky is cursed and destined to never find true love but will you fall IN LOVE WITH A MONSTER?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6069666773729280
Story cover:
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Title: Waiting for You (unpublished)
Author: Jiya Patel
Genre: Romance, Drama
Episodes: 3 (waiting for a bg for episode 3, so please ignore the “insert bg here” in episode 3)
Summary: Olivia likes to live in her small, little world. CJ likes to travel around and explore. Will their two different worlds collide or will they be forever apart? [INK]
Style: Ink
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6043964491759616

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I’d love a review! I have two stories, so you can just do one if you would like :slight_smile:

Story: Adventurous: Time Immune
Genre: Adventure
Summary: When loud-mouth Mikea sets off on a road-trip with YOU, it becomes harder to hide the truth of your origin… oh, and that you are an immortal cyborg.
CC, POC, LGBT, multiple endings
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6566049968685056

Story: Sorry, Wrong Number
Genre: Thriller
Summary: “And that’s how we’ll get rid of the body. Sorry, wrong number.”
When a text is sent to the wrong person, it leads to a race against time to prevent a murder. TEXT BASED
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5933958626344960

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