BRUTALLY HONEST story reviews!

Hi everyone!
Daliah here and I’ve recently had a thread where I read you guys stories! I Will Like To Read You Guys Stories!
This thread is where I read you guys stories 1 at a time due to passes


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    If you rush I will not read your story because I’m reading other people’s stories!

    This thread is not here for me to hurt your feelings, it’s here for me to be honest about you story and what improvements you need to make.

    There will be a waiting list and ill do 4 stories 1 at a time so if your name is on the waiting list patiently wait

I hope you guys understand the concept

If you have any questions about the review and why I gave it you can PM me or DM me on insta @dailahepi_



Thank you for doing this
Here’s mine…

Title: Shado
Author: Roy
Description: After tragedy, Roy returns to civilization a changed women. She begins her crusade, determined to put things right, with the help of her trusted people,waging a one-woman on crime.
Genre : Action
Style: Ink
Chapters: 9 and ongoing

Title: Dance Party
Author: Karlon Artis
Genre: Drama
Description: Akira Arakaki has been a professional dancer for several years, but a few subpar dance performances make him lose confidence in his talent. Can he restore his confidence?

Hey, thank you for this!

Author: Emma.stories
Title: Squad: That summer
Description: A trip to celebrate graduation seemed like a great idea; until the trip is cut short by the death of one of your friends. Was it an accident? You’re not so sure.

Genre: Drama
Style: Limelight
Instagram account: secrets.epi


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ooo I would love to do this after I publish :blush:

I love! Do you also review unpublished stories? :slight_smile:

Yeah ofc just send the link!

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Yay appreciate it! Below is the link to my unpublished story :blush: I would love to know what else is there to improve and if this story is something people would want to read. Thank you so much for your willingness :heartpulse:

Great I’ll PM you since I have free time right now!

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Lovely! Take as much time as you need :hugs:


Would love a review from you, please DM me @days.episode and I’ll follow you back :heart:

Awesome! Mine is called Squad: Everest Fall

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Hey there, here is my story :hugs::heart:
Title: Your Heart My Heart
Genre: Drama
Episodes: 5
Style: Ink
Description: Michelle has never been in love but when she meets a boy with an unusual past who ends up being her new classmate things start to go upside down. No cc, art scenes


Uses a lot of overlays, sometimes you won’t be able to pick an outfit

Thanks for this thread.
Title: 1 Million Dares
Author: CassieC
Genre: Drama
Style: limelight
Description : Welcome to the World’s Most Eligible Daredevil Reality Show, where contestants must compete to win 1 Million dollars doing dangerous dares and challenges. Will you come out on top?
Link :

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Hi can you review my story please
Story Name Beguile
Genre Rom/drama

Here’s mine!
Name: Arena Of Pride
Genre/s: Drama filled with romance
Author: Jelly
Episodes: 9 (more coming soon)

The streets of Morocco are swimming in crime secrets. Accidentally - a twist of fate, drags Layla and her family deep down in the mafia world, where she meets Oscar Kebryak.

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I’d love a review <3

Here’s my story:

Thank you for this!! :heart:
Here’s my story;

Title: SQUAD: A Tale of Friendship and Love
Genre: Comedy, Drama, Romance
Style: LL
Author: Amisha Sharma
Description: What happens when your brother’s crush is crushing on your childhood crush? And you just met a cutie. The story will differ according to your love interest’s gender preference
(Full CC, LGBTQ, choice matters, you can choose your name and your love interest’s gender)


HI, I would like a review plz, thank you
Title I won’t go without you
Author name: Luna Martinez 1
Instagram: @episode_luna_martinez
Style: Limelight
Genre: Fantasy/Romance
Description: Your character Amber gets caught up in a deal made with the devil himself. Now ur trying to find a way home before it’s too late and your whole life changes. But will you find love along the way? LL, CC

The Best Stories Are Worth Sharing: I won’t go without you CC* 10 OUT NOW

Checkout this story, on the Episode App! If you like it, support the story by passing it along!

Thank you for ur time

here are the details (take your time! :heartbeat:):

  • Story title -The Flame Between Us
  • Genre - Drama
  • Story description - After being sent to Military School for 3 long years, Ellen begins her senior year at her old school, Maxwell High. What could go wrong when her past comes back to bite her?
  • Episode user - Brianna Cavazos
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  • Link to your story -