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Here is my story
Title : Jungle Fever
Author : Maggy
Genre : Romance/Drama
Style : Ink
Number of episodes : 6 (more episodes coming soon)
Instagram : maggy.episode
Description : A bad boy Prince with a lot of ego and a womanizer, gets lost in the middle of the Jungle and meets a fierce African Princess called Maya. Will he handle the change of environment ?
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I’ll read the first 3 episodes of each of your stories.
Okay, thank you, take your time
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Title: Crossed Paths
Author name: Dreamer
Description: Mindy’s life’s filled with joy and laughter but is haunted by heartbreak. All that changes when she meets Derek. Will he be able to mend her broken heart? CHOICES MATTER!
Follow Mindy through a journey of ups and downs, surrounded by bonkers friends and family and self-discovery!
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5294643993772032 4
Episodes: SIX (and counting)
Small Cover:
Great! Second batch of five.
Title : Lawa Bay
Cover :
Author(s) : KC
Description : With a serial killer on the loose, the small northern town of Lawa Bay is forced to find and apprehend the murderer before another death occurs.
Episodes : 6 (ongoing)
Tags : Mystery, Romance, Drama, Comedy, Action, Adventure, Thriller, Horror, Murder
Inspiration : 90’s Diner Vibes, Riverdale, and Supernatural.
Second batch. c;
Thanks!!!
I finished the first three episodes!
Grammar 7/10
Sometimes you forgot the exclamations at the end of sentences, and one time in episode 2, when there was a choice, it was like this: choice1 and choice2. But for the most part, the grammar was overall better than some stories I’ve read in the past.
Length 10/10
The episode lengths were worthy, and good. The first episode, being a pilot, it being short was fine, for 2 and three the episodes were full of good juicy info.
Character Placement 2/5
When reading, placement was okay, but at some points, it felt totally off, and not properly placed. As an example, when Scarlet was in bed, she starts off the bed in the scenes, the next thing, she’s properly on the bed.
Storyline 4/5
So far, I’ve been interested, but still wondering how life goes on. Not much character development except for feeling sorry yet. You made a real, but deep plot that you should truly build on.
Cover (why judge?)
Exactly??
Inspiration 100/100
This doesn’t need a description.
Description 9.5/10
The description really fits her nightmares she goes through every night, and the wonder of if it will ever stop, or if it will haunt her into the future.
So everyone in the first and second batch, my Episode is having troubles loading, so I might get a little sidetracked, please help me and be patient, thanks.
Thank you so much!
I’ve reread my story a hundred times and still don’t find all the mistakes
There seems to be a glitch because you’re the first one who says there are problems with character placement, I’ll check it!
Thanks for your feedback!
No prob.
Of course
Name: The Ember Moon Pack
Description:
Being a werewolf is not easy. Especially when you have 3 hot hybrids following your every move.
New episodes every week!
Customizable Characters, 5 Endings, Choices Matter
Chapters: technically 8 bc ch 1 is customization
Genre: Fantasy/romance/horror
Style: Limelight
Link:
Instagram: gisellepisode
Want updates on this story? Here’s the update thread!
Sorry forgot to mention inspiration:
My personal outlook on love (very loose inspo) - I have in the past pushed people away and this has been something I have regretted deeply so I wish to help others to not go through that.
However, Mindy and Derek came from a dream I had. The character development came from a few early morning runs haha
Thanks! Second batch. c;
Thank you! Didn’t see this before, second batch.