Would you read a story like this? What makes it stand out? How could I improve it?
I am currently writing a ButlerxEmployer story (aka love-story/forbidden romance). NO! NOOOO LOVE AT FIRST SIGHTS!
The setting is in Japan, which mean most of the characters are japanese. They may look like different shades of white or light tan. There are many background extras with different nationalities. Sometimes, they may be interacted with and other times, not at all. The main love-interest is also Brazilian. There is also a transgender afro-japanese bestie who dresses wild, and her gay lover who is super cute.
Well, until season two, since that will be set in Rio Grande do Sul, Brazil. Then, everybody is going ham, even great grandma in the wheelchair.
Basically, diversity. How can I improve it and what stands out? I need real diveristy. Think of characters who may stand out most, even if they are just supporting or background characters.
There is a canon love-interest (Kinda like the current Miraculous situation with Adrien and Marinette). There are also temporary love-interest who are male and female characters (Four in total). The MC has never been in love or thought about relationships. So, now that somebody who you have selected has ignited that heavy beating of her heart, she may become bi-curious. OR, for season-one only, you can also choose NOT to have a love-interest at all and focus on your job (even though the canon love-interest is still present because of the initial goal).
Sexuality structure. I am trying to fit in everybody, even people who don’t want to date. What do you think?
This story contains abuse and abandonment within flashbacks. I don’t want to cause anybody uneasiness. So, whenever the issue is too much to handle, I will make a choice option that can skip it or not.
Awareness. Depressingly, these things do happen in many forms. What is your take?
Would anybody be interested in reading this? What should I improve on? What stands out the most? I would like to know because this story is important to me. I don’t normally make stories that are lighthearted most of the time, I usually make ones that leaves even your soul crying, then laughing… Then dying inside… then reviving itself to laugh again. You get my point. XD