I am currently working on a new story entitled: I Know Who You Did Last Summer. Would anyone be interested in reading my story and telling me what their first impressions are? I need a fresh pair of eyes to help me see what a reader would see.
Hello there! I’m Bianca. I’m happy to give it a read and provide tons of feedback, if you’d like?
Let me know! x
Hey, sure! Let me know once you’re ready!
Hello im lana i would love to read your story!!
Here’s the link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5626049664516096
Thank you so much! Tell me what you think? There’s only 1 and a half episodes.
I am going to be very honest i love the whole theme of your story and I definitely want to know when its going to be published!! I love the character customization it makes me feel apart of the story and i love you you can gain points. I was confused at the part when she went to the school but I quickly understood. Also the overlays and the spot directing along with the zooms are beautiful. So i think you are doing great!!
And I promise im not just saying that to be nice im being very honest. I also loved the beginning part I relate to that so much
Thank so much for your feedback! I’ll be sure to keep you posted.
Good luck on your story!!
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