As most of you know I am writing a collection of small stories for my Bailey Files series. I am onto story three, however I would really like for someone to read story 1, 2 and chapter 1 of the 3rd story please and give me like a hand in the wording and or directing so it is perfect for publishing. Story 1 has been published once as well as chapter 1 of the second story but since then I have made adjustments.
Story 1 - 3 chapters
Story 2 - 3 chapters
Story 3 - 1 chapter (so far)
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Hi thank you for replying to this post. I mainly need help with everything other than art. I want to see if my story flows and is readable.
I have created a series of short crime/mystery stories and I am up to story/case 3 so I just want to make sure 1 and 2 are good enough and that with the first chapter of story 3 is on track.
