I just published my story ALMA
I hope you give it a chance and enjoy it
Thank you
Auther: Kayla.B
Genre: Drama
Instagram: kayla_episodewriter
Story Description
Alma’s life was good and filled with happiness
After a ghost from her past comes back her life changes forever.
Is it for better or for worse?
What will happen?
Read to find out.
Hello,
If you have time could you check my story 
Hello,
I’d love a review on my story, I rewrote my story, so I’d like to know if it’s better now.
*Title: Unforgettable
*Author:Alex
*Summary: After you wake up from coma, your life completely changed. Are you up for new challenges, new loves stories and to fight danger?
*Genre: drama
*Episodes Published: 3
Thank you, if you can.
My story: Thriller: Tribe of Malapinchi
Author: Jannah Jackson
Genre: Thriller
Story style: All the 3 episode characters types: LIMELIGHT, INK & ORIGINAL
Description: Toss into a land of the sun, magic, lies and dark secrets. Can you make sense of the havoc you were tossed into and save everyone before it’s too late? CharacterCustomization
Episodes: 4 (but review 3 episodes is grateful to me too )
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5909308359180288
Review: Mainly on the plot and characters I’m alright with everything as well
Additional Notes : Second time publishing and first time entering a thriller contest.
Title: Taming Him CC
Author: UnknownSnowFlake
Genre: Romance
Style: Ink
Description: You’re betrothed to a billionaire against your will, but it gets worse. You’re a vigilante- an international thief, and he’s trying to kill you. Betrayal or love? Choice is yours.
How many episodes do you want to be reviewed (3 MAX): 3
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Name: Coincidence or Destiny
Description:
Aurora loved her life, but during the summer she met a boy and her life starts to change completely
The meeting was coincidence or destiny?
Episode I want to be reviewed: 4
Genre: Drama
Style: Ink
Instagram: kateb_episode
Link:
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Hey, thank you for creating this thread. I would love a review.
Title: The Four Horsemen
**Author:**S_Unique
Genre: Fantasy
Style: Ink
**Description:**4 Sins. 4 Angels fell. 4 Horsemen rose. A curse was casted. And the battle of good vs evil is about to begin. CC/ Choices matter
**How many episodes do you want to be reviewed (3 MAX):**3
Cover Picture:
Hello Alyssia! Your story review is finished!
Sorry for the delay, I took a break for reviews, but I’m here again, hope you like it!
Title: Sinful Desires by Alyssia K.
First Impression:
In my first impression of this story I was wowed by the art and covers, they look amazing!
At first it seems like a tragic story, although the name doesn’t seem to match the description that much. A tragedy story with sinful desires? that can confuse readers a little bit.
Grammar: 9/10, I just noticed few errors like “What kind of lipstick do ‘i’ want.” (Instead of ‘I’ want) nothing drastic, though.
Plot: 8/10.
I love how it’s set “between times”, first it’s set six years ago and then present. Also, it deals with themes like harassment and bullying, I have to say I’m impressed by that, they do happen and not every story has them.
Characters:
Roselyn is pretty normal, she isn’t annoying or tries too much, just the average, which is great, people can feel very identified with characters like that.
Declan is very protective and jealous, but just enough, AT FIRST. (This is just an opinion) It’s really creepy that he wants to kill Cody just because he is Roselyn’s boyfriend, it shows that something is wrong with his mental health and it’s not attractive at all if that’s what you’re trying to do, I kind of get that he killed his friend, because he tried to take advantage of Roselyn, but Cody did nothing wrong and the fact that Declan wanted to kill him made him seem like an antagonist, he doesn’t want her to be happy, he wants her to be happy with HIM, that’s selfish and a little creepy.
Directing: 10/10
This is usually the section where I take a lot of time to review, but the story has a great use of spot command, as well as transitions, simple and advanced directing. No comments on here, the directing is just fine.
Narration and conversations:
Conversations are fluent and realistic, that’s what I look for in a story, characters that don’t try too hard on showing expressions, etc.
Overall thoughts and tips:
First of all, the backgrounds characters, the letter, the dress overlay on chapter 3, yes, just yes. Little details that make a story a lot cooler, you nailed them.
Roselyn’s mom is the best, I love her!
I suggest you give characters backstory or a little information, sometimes I failed to know who was who. Giving a backstory leaves room for character development and therefore it’s easier for your readers to familiarize with them.
This story is great overall, and with all the stories out there I personally think it deserves more readers, keep on writing and improving, I wish you the best of the lucks!
Story Rating: 4.8/5.0
Story review by Camilo Writes.
Thank you for requesting a review in my workshop and I hope you like it, let me know when you read it!
Remember that if you have problems with it or anything you’d like to say, PM me.
Title: I Love You to Death
Author: Kiki K.
Genre: Romance
Style: Limelight
Description: Their friendships have kept them together since birth, but what happens when love and tragedy tries to split them apart?
Episodes to Review: 2
Cover Picture:
Thank you so much for doing this for the community!! I’d love to grab a review for my story Closing the Distance.
Title: Closing the Distance
Author: G. Lambent
Genre: Comedy/Adventure/Romance
Style: INK
Description: When Thea finds herself trapped on the other side of the country with no money, a suitcase and a man she hates, travelling home becomes an adventure that will change her life.
How many episodes do you want to be reviewed (3 MAX): 3 please
I am squealing! I have seen your story as recommendations - it looks sooo good 
Awweee That’s so weird that you’ve seen it before 
Thank you!!
No problem and I saw it be recommended by someone on Insta as well as on the app haha
On the app!! Woah!!
Hi Camilo. I would love to have an honnest review about my story!
Title: Good Morning Stockholm!
A huge thanks to you
Hi!
I would love to get a review of my story so far.
Title: The Lost Princess
Author: T. Sofia
Genre: Fantasy/Romance
Style: INK
Description: 7 Kingdoms , 1 broken rule and 1 lost princess. Will she ever find her way back home? Read and follow the adventures of Princess Stella and her boys.
3 episodes
LINK: https://www.episodeinteractive.com/s/6511479670833152
Title: Created By Darkness
Author: Demon Buttercup
Genre: Drama
Style: Ink
Description: Having a impulsive mother, you’re moving yet again. New town, new faces and a whole new set of problems. How will you navigate friends, boys and a crazy family?
Thank you!
Title: Accepting desire
Author: Jane Bennet
Genre: Romance and mafia
Style: Ink
Description: A young South African doctor goes to New York to get away from her ghosts. Little did she know it would lead her straight into Leo arms. He is ruthless she is a moralist. Can they face their feelings and accept the desire they feel for one another?
How many episodes do you want to be reviewed (3 MAX):
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I’d like the review through PM please!! Thank you so much 
Title: TATYA: Professor Fever
Author: Giselle C.
Genre: Drama
Style: INK
Story Description: Tatyas life has been a series of unfortunate events. The only thing keeping her going is her love for law. Will the new hot prof keep her from achieving her goal?
Instagram: @gisellepisode
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Title: LURKING IN THE SHADOWS
style: INK
genre: Thriller/Horror/Mystery
Episodes Released: 3 (ONGOING)
Description: Carol is haunted by a series of terrifying dreams & cassettes.She strives to find her missing sister but is unaware that her six sense may led to unforeseeable consequences…
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6312894764285952
Maximum three episodes should be reviewed
Additional Notes:
The story uses sound,music, good directing and point system with prizes included at the end of first, 3rd and 5th episode.Different types of choices apart from outfit choices are included that might challenge your mental skills as well as they do matter.Feedback via Q/A will be appreciated.
Title: Still Silent
Author: Ada Larke
Genre: Drama/Romance
Style: Limelight
Description: Due to troubling circumstances, you’re forced to move back to your hometown in the hopes of a fresh start… but that fresh start isn’t what you thought it would be.
How many episodes do you want to be reviewed (3 MAX): I have 4 published, you can review as much as you feel like
Link: http://www.episodeinteractive.com/s/5190749735944192
Hope you enjoy! 
