Camilo Writes' story reviews. [HONEST REVIEWS] [CLOSED]

Title: Inner Circle
Author: zapcatini
Genre: Drama
Style: Limelight
Description: The lives & lies of rich and famous college students aren’t as glamorous as they appear. Are you ready for the world of scandals, money, and class, where rules don’t exist? CC LGBT
How many episodes do you want to be reviewed: 3, but if you are busy you can just do 1
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Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5840098589016064

Thank you!

Title: New Life Abroad
Author: Alifah & Ricki
Genre: Drama, romance
Style: Limelight
Description: You’ve always wanted to join a sorority, but what happens when your college doesn’t have them? Join the MC on her journey through a foreign country, and learn about a new culture!
How many episodes do you want to be reviewed (3 MAX): 3, please.
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Link To Story: https://www.episodeinteractive.com/s/6743558023348224
Additional notes: Thank you for taking your time to review my story :slight_smile:

Thanks for the thread

Title: The Star Necklace

Genere: Drama

Style: ink

Episodes wanted to be reviewed: 3

Description: you are the most rich girl in your country in addition you’re famous but what happens when the Star Necklace uncovers your true identity

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title: Inner Circle LL
Author: zapcatini
Genre: drama
Style: LL
Description: The lives & lies of rich and famous college students aren’t as glamorous as they appear. Scandal, secrets, love and lust. Can you handle a world where rules don’t exist? CC LGBT
How many episodes: 3
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Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5840098589016064
Additional notes: The customization has all features in episode one, but it used to only have some so I updated it.

I would love to have a review :blush:

My story:
Title: The Shadow and the Hunter
Author: Reema
Genre: Drama
Style: ink
Episodes: 6 (ongoing!!!)
Description: The shadow and the Hunter! Enemies finally meet but do they know who the other one is? Who is stronger and what happens if a dangerous love affair develops?
How many episodes to be reviewed: 3

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5578702620000256

Thank you offering to do this! I have two stories, but you can only do one if you would like! :slight_smile:

Adventurous: Time Immune

Title: Adventurous: Time Immune
Author: Lizzy.Writes
Genre: Adventure
Style: Ink, Spotlight
Description: When loud-mouth Mikea sets off on a road-trip with YOU, it becomes harder to hide the truth of your origin… oh, and that you are an immortal cyborg.
CC, multiple endings, choices matter
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How many episodes do you want to be reviewed (3 MAX): 3
Link to story: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6566049968685056
Additional notes: This story is completed :slight_smile:

Sorry, Wrong Number

Title: Sorry, Wrong Number
Author: Lizzy.Writes
Genre: Thriller
Style: Text Story
Description: “And that’s how we’ll get rid of the body. Sorry, wrong number.” When a text is sent to the wrong person, it leads to a race against time to prevent a murder. TEXT STORY
How many episodes do you want to be reviewed (3 MAX): 3
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Link to story: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5933958626344960
Additional Notes: This story does not utilize any of of the traditional art styles, but is instead all told in a text message conversation.

Title : Take My Heart
Episode Author : Jiya
Genre : Romance
Style : Ink
Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4602924031868928
Description : Shawn visits NY to get away from his childhood love. But what happens when he meets an ordinary girl? Will she help him unite with his love or show him what real love is?
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Episodes : 1 (more to come)

Title: My Kalona
Author: Ray Edwin (pen name)
Genre: Fantasy
Style: LL/SL
Description: Naomi desperately tries to bond with her estranged father, but becomes the prisoner of a Native-American curse that threatens all. Will her choices lead to freedom or failure?
How many episodes do you want to be reviewed: 3 please
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Link To Story: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4559018983227392
Additional notes:
The chapter lengths will vary depending upon your choices throughout the game (character gains or losses, scenes locks and unlocks etc…

@camilowrites
UPDATE: I have completed revamping 1-6. Just wanted to let you know.
You can review 3 of mine if u don’t mind…No rush u can take your time…
This is my first story and english is not my first language…I will try to correct the grammatical error as soon as i can!!

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Story Title: Black Hearts, Golden Desires
Genre: fantasy
Description: Nand is a princess of Solataria, along with her better two halves, her sisters. But what will happen if an old enemy arises back for revenge? Will Nand be able to handle it?
Chapter: 7 (more coming up soon)
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5019562149478400
Instagram: @epi.madhubhgd

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Hello! I’d like to request a review! Thank you for your help!
Title: Monster Or Mortal?
Author: Andrea H.
Genre: Comedy
Style: INK
Description: Life’s always fun and games when you encounter an explosion then wake up in the middle of nowhere, being the supernaturally annoying person you are and live. That’s Edon’s case.
How many episodes do you want to be reviewed (3 MAX): 3
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Link To Story: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4672006309806080
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Story name: MoonStar
Author: Mayalina
Genre: Fantasy/romance
style: Limelight
episodes: 5 (more coming!!)
description: You play as a girl called Michaela. She is an half elf half human girl who lives alone with her sister. But for some reason Michaela is being hunted by an evil elf group who are trying to kill her. Will she survive? And why do they want to kill her?
Instagram: mayalina.episode
link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5505856963936256

Title: Magical Secrets
Author: Molly
Genre: Mystery
Style: Limelight
Description: Your a witch needing to enter earth for the elite witch school. Your powers grow stronger and stronger until your Head Mistress finds out and starts to feel threatened that you’ll take her lovingly spot.
How many episodes do you want to be reviewed (3 MAX): 1- as it’s the only one
Cover not yet completed

Link To Story: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6541189948178432
Additional notes: I only have one episode completed!

Title: Soul Slave
Author: Ray Edwin
Genre: Fantasy (sci-fi / romance)
Style: LL/SL
Description: Lilly, an edgy teen and alien enthusiast, scores sold out tickets to the Annual Alien Expo. While there, things get a little weird, even by her standards! (LL/SL/NH)
How many Chapters to review: 3


Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4645740920242176

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Title: Break Away
Author: Giana
Genre: Drama
Style: Ink
Description: Twins Blythe and Braxton have only ever had each other. That was until Holden and Collin came along. What happens when one twin wants to follow a path of love desire and destruction?
How many episodes do you want to be reviewed (3 MAX): 3 Please!
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Link To Story: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5048325481234432

Title: A MERMAID’S LOVE
Author: Karthi
Genre: fantasy
Style: limelight
Description: You are the princess of “MERMAID WORLD”. You have a wedding arrangement with a bad prince who you hate. If you do not marry by the age of 18 “YOU’LL DIE”. Can you find true love?
How many episodes do you want to be reviewed (3 MAX): 2
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Link To Story: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5784001083670528

Hi, thanks for this thread :heart:
Review 3 episodes if still open
Here’s my story
Falling For Bad :skull:
Plot : Two ex-best friends,one with anger problems and one with cyclothymia disorder.
Both are bad for Kate,but one is going to win her heart.
[LL,CC,Point System,Choice Matter,Minigames]
Episodes : 10
Status : On going
Gerne : Romance & Drama :heart_eyes: & :pensive:
Style : Limelight
CC : Available :white_check_mark:
Also : In my story, I use New Backgrounds other from Episode’s Art Catalogue and Overlays .
My story contains, Minigames & Point System and your choices matter and affect your status with the characters! :smile:
Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6387556438835200
My IG : @nellyy.epi

Story Cover [Made by me] :

Ill take a review!

Story Name - Beyond Repair
Instagram - giana.epi
Author - Giana
Genre - Romance
Episodes - 3
Summary - After a tragic accident Lola leaves her hometown hoping to find herself again, but she finds someone else instead, Is Lola capable of love or if she broken beyond repair?
Style - Ink
Link- http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4518274726690816
Cover - BEYOND%20REPAIR%20LARGE%20COVER%20 BEYOND%20REPAIR%20SMALL%20COVER

Hey! I’m trying to improve and promote a story and I need a really honest review.

Title: Feminism
Author: Maria P. Whiberlli
Genre: Drama
Style: Limelight, Cinematic
Description: Five women whose rights have been taken away from them. Five pieces that will change the law. Men and Women will be equals once all pieces have been found.
How many episodes do you want to be reviewed (3 MAX): Just the 1st one. (The others are locked)
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(I hope nobody steals this.)
Link To Story: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4809427874873344
Additional notes: There are a few spelling mistakes that I already took care of but can’t update otherwise it would upload an unfinished episode. Fell free to say them anyway cause there might be some that went unnoticed.

Thank you for your time

Hi, thank you for making this thread! :grin:
I just published a story, and I’d love some feedback on it! Here are the details:

Title: Sidereal
Author: aprilish
Genre: Fantasy/Romance
Style: Limelight
Blurb: An unlikely turn of events brings Dahlia from outer space to outside Felix’s window. Join them on their star-crossed journey as they cherish the wonders of being worlds apart.
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5063859204587520
How many episodes I want reviewed: 3 would be fab, but as many as you want :slight_smile:

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Thank you so much! :heartbeat: