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My story: Girls Just Wanna Have Fun
Author: MKG
Genre: Romantic Comedy / Slice of Life
Story style: Limelight
Description: Kiara, Willow, Samantha, and Sooyoung are just 4 girls trying to survive high school. Follow them as they grow up and discover first love, pain and what true friendship means.
Episodes: 3 so far
Link http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4612451922411520

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Can you review my story? I just got approved for The Epys Awards and I want to make sure my story is the best it can be! :heart_eyes::joy:

Story : Mischief Night:vampire:t3::heart_eyes::jack_o_lantern::ghost::orange_heart::tada:

Chapters: 7 Ongoing

Genre: Fantasy/Horror/Comedy

Plot:

This Story follows Brooklyn, a girl who hates Halloween but soon finds herself in a world with Real Monsters!:vampire:t2::woman_zombie::ghost:
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Title: Too Late
Author: ttelizabeth
Genre: Romance
Style: Limelight
Description: Kelsey is the top event planner in LA. What happens when an old flame unexpectedly comes back into her life?
How many episodes do you want to be reviewed (3 MAX): Just the first one :slight_smile:
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Link To Story: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5208418652585984
Additional notes: Just looking for someone to tell me if I’m going in the right direction or not since this is my first story!

Title:
One Day
Author:
Ellie
Genre:
Romance, Comedy, Drama
Style:
Limelight
Description:
Best friends since the day they were born and when it comes to love, it’s always been everyone but each other. They couldn’t possibly be meant to be, could they?
How many episodes do you want to be reviewed (3 MAX):
First 3 please!
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Link To Story:

Additional notes:
I truly appreciate the feedback, thank you! :slight_smile:

is this closed?

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Title: Love and Debt
Author: ALX
Genre: Drama
Style: LL
Description: He’s rich, attractive and broken. She’s cold, orphan and a thief. When their paths crossed, things get messy. This is where it’s getting interesting. CC
How many episodes do you want to be reviewed (3 MAX):
Cover Picture:
Link To Story: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5002205148020736
Additional notes: I have another story can One love at the time if you want to review it too. Here’s the link:

http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5692969561751552

Title name: Lexi’s Guide To Romance
Author name: Paris Harris (me)
Description: Can you live up to your famous matchmaker parents and match these 10, inexperienced daters while also balancing your own terrible romantic life?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5258364306653184

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Episodes: Only have one out
Genre: Comedy/Romance
Story Style (INK/Classic/LL): Limelight

This story is not published yet but want to get someone’s views on the first chapter :slight_smile:

Title: Mystery on Hanging Hill Lane
Author: Marshmallow O.
Genre: Mystery, Romance, Comedy
Summary: Time is running out as you and your friends try to escape the mysterious sleepover that you were invited to… Read to uncover the Mystery on Hanging Hill Lane.
Chapters: 4 (More to come)
Style: Limelight

Create your own characters and Choices Matter!:blush:

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6250660385652736
Shortened Link: https://bit.ly/2FHhOMS

I know that this was a few months ago but it’s so crazy to see this on here because now this is by far one of my favorite episode stories I’ve ever read but back in September I hadn’t even started reading it and the cover was still being approved.

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Hahahaha thank you! It’s still weird to me when I see some of my old posts :joy: I’m flattered that you’re enjoying the story :heart:

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Np! I started a story recently and I honestly can’t imagine anyone seeing it. It’s so weird to think that when it comes out a few people may actually read it. :joy: :heart:

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Don’t give up on it! Everyone has to start somewhere hahahaha :joy:

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this story looks so good! would you like to do a read for read?

Title: Mystery on Hanging Hill Lane
Author: Marshmallow O.
Genre: Mystery, Romance, Comedy
Summary: Time is running out as you and your friends try to escape the mysterious sleepover that you were invited to… Read to uncover the Mystery on Hanging Hill Lane.
Chapters: 4 (More to come)
Style: Limelight

Create your own characters and Choices Matter!:blush:

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6250660385652736
Shortened Link: https://bit.ly/2FHhOMS

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Title: MC: The Bar on 23rd
Author: Dr.Smile
Genre: Romance
Style: INK
Description:
The link between taking action and nostalgia is an odd stranger who seems to poison him with the one thing that sunk him in the first place: love.
How many episodes do you want to be reviewed (3 MAX):
3
Cover Picture:
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Link To Story:


Additional notes:
Take your time.

Title: Scars
Author: inxmyxeyes
Genre: Action
Style: LL
Description: The past created who she is right now. Life never goes easy on her. That’s why she became so ruthless to anyone she’s ever met.
How many episodes do you want to be reviewed (3 MAX): 2
Cover Picture: Still, there is no Cover Picture.
Link To Story: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5583421419094016
Additional notes: I hope you don’t mind reviewing an unpublished story. So, before publishing, I wish to know there are any mistakes in the direction and the conversations between characters. So far, I finished just one episode, still writing. But as soon as I will know what looks bad, I can fix it. Take as much time as you need!

[Edit] I already finished two episodes.

Hey!!
I need someone to review my first story that i have written and i saw ur post and thought you would be great for it.
Title: My parents divorce
Author: Michelle
Genre: Drama
Description: Michelle’s parents are divorced, what will she do when her family starts breaking apart and she has to deal with another new upcoming family.
Episodes: 2
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thanks so much

Title : Queen
Author : Steffi
Genre : Drama, Romance
Style : Limelight
Description: All her life, Devina was raised learning the ways of being a proper lady of the nobility. But her life is suddenly disrupted when a royal advisor visits and reveals to her that she is the next monarch of Artesia. WIll she reign? Or will she renounce her claim to the throne? Will she choose love or duty? It’s all up to you!!
**# of episodes would like reviewed ** : 3 episodes

Title: Sunrise -in blossom-
Author: Anna Yong
Genre: Romance
Style: Ink
Description: That one sunrise that made him realise he couldn’t let go. That one sunrise that made her realise she had to let go.
How many episodes do you want to be reviewed (3 MAX): 3
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Link To Story: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5816861152641024
Additional notes: none

Here it is :smile: