Can anybody please review my story?

hiya! my story, Fairy Trouble, by TTrain isn’t doing so well. I was wondering if something was wrong with it or…
so, i was wondering if anybody would like to make a review for me?
it’s called fairy trouble, and make sure the author is TTrain because many stories have the same title
thank you SO much!

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ill check it out.

The text overlays are pretty cool, andddd OMG I PICKED THE WRONG CHOICE AHHHHHHHH XDDDD

character need to be at a higher layer to be in front of overlay.

Great work using the overlays.

Reading chapter 2 and the grammar is doing pretty good.

omg yay! tysm

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what wrong choice did you make?

omg the scream sound, is tht for female? I guess thats the new sound and im laughing and the choice between trusting stormy to follow her lol

We have a grammar/spelling thread called “Ren and Jem’s proof-reading workshop” where you can request for a review. Even though we mainly look at your writing, we do look at other things as well :yay:

Yes, this is a shameless self promo :joy: :see_no_evil:

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Is there a link?

🎃 Ren and Jem’s Proof-Reading Workshop 🎃 :blob_sun:

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Oh my gosh! Thank youuu~

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