Can anyone anyone shout-out my story please?

Hey guys I just published my story I would appreciate if you guys read it, thank you :smiling_face_with_three_hearts: :grinning:

Your story has potential but you have spelling mistakes which is a turn off for me. Also a bit of grammar mistakes.

okay thank you so much for the feedback

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