If anyone is interested, DM me and I’ll share a private YT video of a screen recorder since the story is incomplete and unpublished.
The story is an upcoming entry for the queer contest
Here’s an optional form or things to consider:
Rate /10:
Favorite scene:
Least favorite scene & why:
Any literature mistakes?:
Positives:
Negatives:
Suggestion on improvements:
Would you continue to episode 2?: