Can anyone beta-read the first episode of my new story for feedback?

If anyone is interested, DM me and I’ll share a private YT video of a screen recorder since the story is incomplete and unpublished. :two_hearts::rose:

The story is an upcoming entry for the queer contest :rainbow:

Here’s an optional form or things to consider: :see_no_evil:

Rate /10:
Favorite scene:
Least favorite scene & why:
Any literature mistakes?:
Suggestion on improvements:
Would you continue to episode 2?:


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Bump :sparkles:


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Glad you’re interested! Can you DM me? :see_no_evil:

I’m down, PM me with a link.

Bump :sparkles:

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