Can anyone give me some advice on my story?

I’m currently writing a story, and I’ve added an LGBT+ option because I come from an LGBT+ family (I have 2 mums), and wanted my story to be more inclusive. However, the option doesn’t have an impact on the story, and I don’t want it to seem like I only put it in there to claim my story is diverse., so I don’t know if I should take it out or not. I would like to keep it in, but it’s going to be hard to edit the plot to make it more realistic. Another idea I had was to only use the LGBT+ option. What do you think?

  • Keep it in + change the plot
  • Keep it and + don’t change the plot
  • Take it out
  • Only use the LGBT+ option

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I mean you either add it in or you don’t. You said you want to keep it in, so keep it in.

I really don’t think it’s a big deal, I mean I guarantee it’s not gonna be represented by stereotypes ,so what’s the biggie?

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