Can anyone please review/help with my story? :)

I actually started thinking that maybe I should have taken more than 3 months to better up my story.
I was wondering if anyone would please review my story and help me out on how I can make it better! :grinning:
Once I get the help I’m gonna hide my story for fixing.
I ask if you review all my episodes.
Will someone please help me with my story?
Title: Best friends forever
Style: INK
Author: Erica Jane
Genre: Drama, romance, and a little comedy
Episodes: 4
Description: 3 long-lasting best friends meet together again, and they welcome a 4th best friend in their group. Together, they face challenges in their teen life.
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link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6648217396969472

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Hey! Give me a couple of days and I’d gladly give you a review :grin:

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Thank you so much!

I can review your story as well…

I’ll message you on what I think.

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Thank you so much! :grin: