Hey, I had decided to revamp my story and I am finally done with the first chapter. I had my story revamped many times in the past bc 1st it was bad and 2d many readers couldn’t understand what’s going on.
Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease, I want an honest review! I want many ppl to review it because I do not want to revamp it again! I know that revamping can be very annoying to the readers, so please, help me with your honest opinion! I will appreciate every opinion regardless if it’s “negative” or not
Only keep in mind that English is not my first language so the grammar won’t be that good and before I ask a proofreader I want to be sure that I will not change anything on the script. And that’s one more reason that I need someone to review it.
I will give you credits in my story and if you have a story I could try to help you too.
story: king’s desire plot: Your visions lead you to another dimension. You have to hide your identity in order to survive, but how will you manage to do that when you fall for the prince? genre: fantasy