I am currently working on a story in LL called “Sincerely, Maylene” with full CC and a female or male love interest. I have 4 episodes written so far, and I am planning on pre-writing my story before publishing it. I would love it if someone could give me an in depth review, because I want to improve.
Here’s the link to my story: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4898101651111936. I( hope the link works!)
I’d love to hear people’s feedback. I don’t think my story is good (yet, hopefully I’ll be able to improve it), so I would really like some help. I’m currently struggling, since I’m worried that I may have not established the characters well enough to make the reader have a good sense of all the characters’ personalities. As you’ll read, the MC goes through something horrible in the 3rd chapter, so I am worried that I have not given the reader enough time to be familiarized with the MC or to like the MC enough to sympathize with her. I am also worried that I rushed the plot.
Thank you! Have a good day and stay safe everyone.
Moved to Share Feedback since you’re looking for proofreading/reviewing. Make sure to check out our Forum Tutorial for more info about creating topics, and feel free to PM me if you’ve got questions.
Thank you so much! t doesn’t worked for a lot of android devices. Are you using trying to access it on the device you use to read Episode? I can try to send the link again. Here: [http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4898101651111936].
Thank you so much! (I accidentally started the 5th episode because I couldn’t find anymore people to my episodes 1-4), so you can just ignore episode 5.
Thank you! I’d love if you could read my story and give me some feedback. That would be super helpful! And I can credit you at the end as a proofreader/help.
Would you mind formatting a request in my linked topic? It will give me a better idea of what type of story I’m dealing with. The theme can vary a lot of my vocabulary and sentence structure. Thank you!
