Can anyone Review my story please


HI, there-
Just wondering if anyone would be kind enough to read my story and Review it please.
I’d really appreciate it.
I’d like to know, if I’ve gone wrong somewhere, so I can improve more on this story and others…
I’m new here, so I don’t really know if I’m doing this right.

Anyways thanks for looking :blush:
Link below 🖓

Hello @Sammy4, this is Sydney the moderator. Welcome to the forum! :smiley: Moved this to Share Feedback since you’re looking for story reviews. Make sure to check out our Forum Tutorial for more info about where to correctly create topics, and feel to PM me if there are any questions. :wink:

Yes i can read yours if you read mine. Read 4 read?

Thank you! :blush:

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Sound awesome,
I’ll get reading your story then. :blush:

Sounds great :blush:i have another one too as well. But you can find it among my page

Great, Thank you! :blush:

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