I really would like a review on my brand new story since it’s my first ever, and I want to know if it’s enjoyable or how I could make it enjoyable if not.
Title: Hale Huna
Author: Anonymous Author
Desc: Kendall’s dad decides to move her and her brothers to Hawaii. She soon discovers she has the key to a world beyond her imagination…and secrets about who her mother really is…
I would appreciate a honest review and your overall opinion on if you would read it if I hadn’t asked you to. Anyone up for it? Please let me know!