HI!! So, I am currently working on a story, and I need someone to review the 1st chapter.
Title: Chained Love
Description: Camila is a cop by day and a stripper by night. But when a top-ranked assassin sets his eyes on her, all hell breaks loose. *CC
PLEASE be honest when giving me feedback. You won’t hurt my feelings. Anyone is free to review it and give me feedback!
I’m reading it now
There is an error in your script. I can’t start it 
I fixed it! Sorry, I had typed in an overlay that was still in review
No problem, I’ll read it tomorrow 
So… I think it’s good, but a little short… 
Yea, I’m still working on the first chapter 
Okay yeah it’s not easy. I worked 2 month on my first three chapters
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