HI!! So, I am currently working on a story, and I need someone to review the 1st chapter.
Title: Chained Love
Description: Camila is a cop by day and a stripper by night. But when a top-ranked assassin sets his eyes on her, all hell breaks loose. *CC
PLEASE be honest when giving me feedback. You won’t hurt my feelings. Anyone is free to review it and give me feedback!
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Nati28
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There is an error in your script. I can’t start it
I fixed it! Sorry, I had typed in an overlay that was still in review
Nati28
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No problem, I’ll read it tomorrow
Nati28
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So… I think it’s good, but a little short…
Yea, I’m still working on the first chapter
Nati28
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Okay yeah it’s not easy. I worked 2 month on my first three chapters
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