Can anyone review my unpublished chapter 1?

It’s a story for the reveal contest.
I’m looking for someone who will give me their opinion, check if I made any mistakes and most importantly, tell me if it’s TOO SHORT asdjhfg i’m really worried

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Sure!!! Send me link I’ll do it!

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thanks a lot!!

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