Can I get some feed back?! Story name : Bella Meets Bad


#1

If I could get some tips and tricks that would be great!


#2

Hey! I can give you some!


#3

Go for it!


#4

I’ll send you the screenshots when I’m done.
You can read mine also!
Title: Fantastical- The Mermaid
Author: Rahdia
Episodes 3 (on going)
LINK: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6670380075057152
Cover: (Not updated yet)


#5

Hi! I have read your story!
I like it but I feel like everything was a little too rushed in. It would be nice to have a brief backstory about Bella. The was some spelling errors and when you narrate maybe lower it a little so that it won’t cover their faces.
If you need any help, I’m here to help!


#6

Thank you so much!

I don’t know why I didn’t think of a back story :woman_facepalming:t3:

But with the narrate parts. I don’t know how to lower them😬


#7

On the app go to create, play the story. On the side are boxes in which you can edit your story. Click on the box that says directing helper.
Another few boxes should pop up at the bottom. Click on bubble helper, this allows you to move the speechbubbles.

After you’re done and you have the position you want; in the script you should write:
@speechbubble is blah blah to 100%
Then when the actually person is talking
Use @speechbubble reset


#8

Thank you so so so much! You should follow me on insta! @mckenzie.episode


#9

Cool my insta is @PrncssPscs
You can read my story as well. I sent you the link uptop!


#10

I started it! I love so far!