If anyone can read & tell me what they think about my first episode & what I could do to improve it, I’d really appreciate it! <3
I can also give you feedback!
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I’ll do it 
Thank you!! Do you want me to a read a story of yours?
I’m working on my first chapter but when it’s done I’ll pm you 
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I’d love to if you’re still looking.
Here’s my story if ur interested
Lost Summer Love
Crazy love. Wacky friends. Unnecessary drama. How will Evan and Sierra make it through this crazy thing called, life
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Okay! I’ll totally give it a read
Thanks. I’ll look at yours now and provide some feedback 
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Thank you.
I think your story is really good. I saw no errors and your directing is good. I also like the opening image and the part where he’s leaning against the wall.
The only thing I noticed was payed should be paid. I cropped it so I don’t give anything away 
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Oh dang lol I didn’t even catch that, thank you
No problem. Did you want the second one read as well or just the first? I wasn’t sure.
Oh no the second one isn’t finished lol
Ah ok lol well I’m here should you need someone to look at it 
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