I think it’s good that you have lots of option BUTTTT with that said, make sure you don’t show favoritism towards some characters but not others. If I read your story I want the option to choose who I spend time with. If there’s going to be a date or a hangout have the reader choose who to hangout with, don’t decide for them, it’s no fun and it’s not fair. Other than that I think it sounds great! I prefer stories with more than 1 li because then I have a choice. What if I don’t like the main LI? It ruins the story, having the freedom to choose between LI’s is what I love so much with episode! I would most definitely read your story as you have it now!
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