Can I have some opinions on my story cover?


#1

Which one do you prefer ? And any constructive criticism would be helpful aswell but please be nice ! :grin: this is my first ever time making a cover so I know it isn’t the best :heartpulse:


#2

First off, they’re both gorgeous! But I think the first title is more sophisticated and works quite well. :slightly_smiling_face:


#3

okay thank you, I was trying to decide between the two fonts as its a vampire love story and maybe the second one would go with it but I kinda see where your coming from with the first one :blush:


#4

They’re both really cute though! Let me know when you publish the story. :grin:


#5

will do, but it will probably take me for ages as I’m a perfectionist and want to make everything perfect :blush:
I started another story a couple of months ago but then realised it wasn’t very good but I spent over a month and a half just on the first episode! I need to be a bit more layed back with these kind of things :slightly_smiling_face:


#6

I relate to that! :sweat_smile::blush:


#7

The first one. But if you added like two tone white into red I think the second one would be good to!


#8

im not completely sure what you mean for two tone white into red or am I just being dumb :joy:


#9

I agree I like the first one the best!


#10

Its ok I’ll show you!


#11

also because of the male being a vampire are the fangs visible that I have drawn on him ? I tried drawing abs on him aswell but it didn’t turn out very good :joy: I can draw on paper but can’t draw on an iPad/phone :joy:


#12

I like the first one better, but I have a suggestion for future works: Try to get the most of your character’s borderline (The black line, just to be clear.). I know it can be kind of difficult sometimes, but it’s nice to look at. Well you don’t really have this kind of problem with LL or Classic, tho.


#13

thank you so much :joy:


#14

preview
I didn’t like the white with the red it did not show what I was trying to say very well so I put black but this is what I meant by it lol sorry! :slight_smile:


#15

thats alright :blush: Im not sure how I feel about that look for my cover but I’m sure it would look great on other thing :slightly_smiling_face:


#16

No understand. lol I get it but I love the first one out of these to! :slight_smile:


#17

I will keep that in mind, thank you :blush:


#18

would you also be able to tell he is a vampire because I don’t think his fangs are that visible :laughing: sorry I’m being so annoying just worried they aren’t very good lol


#19

They were one of the first things I noticed so yes, they are visible. :slightly_smiling_face:


#20

oh okay thats good, thank you so much for your help :blush: