Hello, I’m new in the writing area. And I had an idea for a story. But it includes having the reader choosing who character they will be playing as, and I can’t seem to make it work when I actually write it, like, it gives me errors and I don’t know how to fix them. I have also watched all the possible tutorials on youtube but none of them are actually focused on the trouble I’m having. If any of you have tips or a way to make it work, I would be really thankful. Or at least confirm if it is actually possible to do it or not. Thanks.
Also, sorry if there are any grammatical mistakes. English is not my first language.
NARRATOR
Before we start... I need to know one thing.
Are you |color:skyblue, italic, animation:shuffle-sideways| good?
Or |color:red, animation:shake| bad?
choice
“Good”{
NARRATOR
A |bold, color:lightpink| good girl |reset| who play by the rules huh? You go girl!
@ALANNA enters from right to screen right @ALANNA faces left @ALANNA is flirt_wink_atcamera
readerMessage Cute, Cute, Cute
NARRATOR
You will be playing as my girl |color:lightpink, animation:shuffle-sideways| Alanna!
Don't be fooled by her angelic looks, she knows how to have fun ;)
gain chose_Good
}“Bad”{
NARRATOR
|bold| Bad Girl|reset| huh? You like adrenalin, I like that.
@MARLEY enters from right to screen right @MARLEY faces left @MARLEY is idle_armscrossed_neutral_loop
readerMessage Hot, Hot, Hot
NARRATOR
You will be playing as my favorite bad girl. |color:teal, animation:shuffle-sideways| Marley!
She is a total bad girl, and hotter than fire. But is it just a cover? You'll have to find out ;)
gain chose_Bad
}
NARRATOR
I'll give you the chance to customize her. So make her pretty!
That´s all I have, because I want to let the readers customize them but it won’t let me.