Can sb tell me how this description sound?

alr so i came up with a description for my new upcoming story “insane for the sane” and i wanted to know if yhu guys would read this story just by reading the description

Description

“Psycho, Crazy, Murderer, Unstable” You’ve been called every name in the book. But once you’ve set your eyes on something…or someone… you’d stop at absolutely nothing to get it…or them…so why stop now? [THRILLER/CHOICES MATTER/LL/LGBTQ]

feel free to give me feedback !

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That is a really good description!

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ahh I’d defo read a story with that description! :heart_eyes:

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i’d definitely read it! :star_struck: :heart_eyes:

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ahh tyy💞

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it took me forever to come up with it but nice to know tyy !

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ty sm :slight_smile:

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I love the description, it makes me curious about the story I’m going to read. :]

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i’m glad :upside_down_face: tyy !

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Ooo, veryy interesting, I’ll def give it a read!

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Good!

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Tell me when your going publish cause I’m definitely interested in reading.

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forsuree will do! ty <33

I’d love to read your story when it’s out! :heart_eyes:

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tyy <333 ikk lyk !

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tag me when you publish thisssssssss

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ahhh forsuree !!

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I love the description, it leaves a lot to be wondered about! I also have been wanting to find another good thriller that’s on the newer side. I’d also love to be tagged when you publish babes! :relaxed:

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ahhh tyyy and ofccc i’ll lyk <333

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Its catchy…but I would advise you to put murderer at last and Unstable at thired place

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