Can some one review my story (Ep. 1-6)

I’ve done this feedback thread before, but people only read the first 2 episodes. Does anyone have spare time to read the entire 6 episodes released so far and give me critical and constructive feedback?
In exchange I can read and review your story, whichever you’d like
Title : Avie
Author : Darknesuni101
Genre : Action/Drama
Episodes : 6, more coming soon
Description :Avie Rayne is a teenage spy. What happens when her undercover spy life clashes with her real life? Drama, romance, and death ensues. (LL, CC, LGBTQ+, 4 Ll)
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Maybe try this thread Let's Learn from Each Other's Stories! they are really and thorough and I love reading their reviews they aren’t mean or anything at all :slightly_smiling_face:.

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Aww, thank you so much!

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Np. I really like your reviews because they are thorough and instead of just saying you don’t like something you tell them how to improve it. Once I’m finished the first 3 chapters of my story I’ll probably put a request in.

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Yeah, I try to offer advice so that writers won’t make the same mistake they did earlier. I’m glad to hear you enjoy the reviews and that they’re helpful. I can’t wait to review your story! ;D

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