Can somebody help me with my plot?

So my story is called : Bad boy 2.0

and it’s about this girl named Lia and she meets one of the bad boys at her school, but she also likes the good guy and she somehow ends up pregnant but doesn’t know the dad to her baby. And she plays around with the bad boy and falls in love with him and instantly is like risking her life for him. And then whiles she pregnant she messes around with her 50 yr old teacher and he’s cheating on his wife with her and Lia’s just having fun. But soon she gets in a car crash and still has her baby with her because she finds out her teacher is 28 and is a vampire mixed with s werewolf and devil.:shushing_face:.

My plot is good right?
@MG_789

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I think you should add a car crash in the middle… maybe a vampire/wolf hybrid sugar daddy that ends up teaching at their school and is also a love interest but I would so read this :grin:

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Honestly this sounds legit, I wanna read it.

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aw thank you :relaxed:

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It sounds really interesting and Fun. I would love to play it :smile:
But the part of the accident and death sounds a little scary to me.

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