Can somebody read my stories please?

And then reply to see if its good?

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I will. P.S wrong category

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oh which category is it?

Promoting your story

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I personally like your story, I feel natural to it. You can work on the spot directing a little more. When the girl was in her hospital clothes, she just changed into her normal clothes and the middle at the hospital. I felt like that was not very realistic.

Duplicate closed. Refer to Promote your story cause I'm bored :smiley: