Can someone check this script?

So I’m trying to get where, when I click definitely at the end I want it to goto Start but it’s not linking back up to it when I try.
This is my script:
EXT. BLUE - DAY with ARROW_LEFT to 0.33 132 305 at layer 10 with ARROW_RIGHT to 0.33 274 305 at layer 10
&overlay ARROW_LEFT opacity 0 in 0 and overlay ARROW_RIGHT opacity 0 in 0 and overlay FLOOR_MIRROR create and overlay FLOOR_MIRROR opacity 1 and overlay FLOOR_MIRROR scales to 1.0 1.0 in 0 and overlay FLOOR_MIRROR shifts to 0 0 in zone 1 in 0 and overlay FLOOR_MIRROR to layer 5 and overlay FLOOR_MIRROR_2 create from FLOOR_MIRROR and overlay FLOOR_MIRROR_2 opacity 1 and overlay FLOOR_MIRROR_2 scales to 1.0 1.0 in 0 and overlay FLOOR_MIRROR_2 shifts to 144 0 in zone 1 in 0 and overlay FLOOR_MIRROR_2 to layer -1
@zoom reset and cut to zone 1

@MIRRORTWIN becomes AMARA
&AMARA spot 1.056 -160 152 in zone 1 at layer 8 and AMARA faces right and AMARA is idle and MIRRORTWIN spot 0.965 480 198 in zone 1 at layer 2 and MIRRORTWIN faces left and MIRRORTWIN is idle

@transition fade in
@AMARA walks to spot 1.056 85 152 in 1.5 and MIRRORTWIN walks to spot 0.965 220 198 in 1.5
@AMARA is idle and MIRRORTWIN is idle
&overlay EFFECT DIM 60 create and overlay EFFECT DIM 60 opacity 1 in 0 and overlay EFFECT DIM 60 to layer 9
&overlay ARROW_LEFT opacity 1 in 0 and overlay ARROW_RIGHT opacity 1 in 0
@speechbubble is 160 230 to 110% with tail_top_left

    NARRATOR
|bold,color:royalblue|Tap on the left and right white arrows to view the next outfit.

&overlay EFFECT DIM 60 to layer 12 and MIRRORTWIN moves to layer 14
&overlay ARROW_LEFT opacity 0.75 in 0 and overlay ARROW_RIGHT opacity 0.75 in 0
&overlay MIRROR_STAND create and overlay MIRROR_STAND opacity 1 in 0 and overlay MIRROR_STAND scales to 1 1 in 0 and overlay MIRROR_STAND to layer 15

    NARRATOR
|bold,color:royalblue|Tap on the mirror when you have chosen which outfit you want to change into.

&MIRRORTWIN moves to layer 2 and overlay EFFECT DIM 60 clear and overlay MIRROR_STAND clear
&AMARA is think_rubchin and MIRRORTWIN is think_rubchin
NARRATOR
|bold,color:royalblue|Now, what do you want to wear?

&overlay MIRROR_STAND_BUTTON create and overlay MIRROR_STAND_BUTTON to layer 15 and overlay MIRROR_STAND_BUTTON opacity 0 in 0 and overlay MIRROR_STAND_BUTTON shifts to 175 46 in 0 and overlay MIRROR_STAND_BUTTON scales to 1.0 1.0 in 0

label start_outfit
&overlay ARROW_RIGHT opacity 1 in 0.3 and overlay ARROW_LEFT opacity 1 in 0.3
@speechbubble reset
@AMARA starts idle and MIRRORTWIN starts idle

######################################################################
############# change outfit name to your STARTING OUTFIT ##############
######################################################################
@MIRRORTWIN changes into MIRRORTWIN_default

tappable
“MIRROR_STAND_BUTTON” {
&overlay ARROW_RIGHT opacity 0 in 0.3 and overlay ARROW_LEFT opacity 0 in 0.3
@MIRRORTWIN =0
@speechbubble is 170 320 to 90% with tail_top_left
&MIRRORTWIN is talk_think_neutral
AMARA (talk_think_neutral)
How about we pick a different outfit to wear?
goto start_outfit
} “ARROW_RIGHT” {
goto outfit_1
} “ARROW_LEFT” {
goto outfit_3
}

label outfit_1
&overlay ARROW_RIGHT opacity 1 in 0.3 and overlay ARROW_LEFT opacity 1 in 0.3
@AMARA starts idle and MIRRORTWIN starts idle

######################################################################
############### change outfit name to your 1st OUTFIT ################
######################################################################
@MIRRORTWIN changes into MIRRORTWIN_SparklyandSmart

tappable
“MIRROR_STAND_BUTTON” {
@MIRRORTWIN =1
&overlay ARROW_RIGHT opacity 0 in 0.3 and overlay ARROW_LEFT opacity 0 in 0.3
@AMARA becomes MIRRORTWIN
@pause for 0.5
goto END_outfit
} “ARROW_RIGHT” {
goto outfit_2
} “ARROW_LEFT” {
goto start_outfit
}

label outfit_2
&overlay ARROW_RIGHT opacity 1 in 0.3 and overlay ARROW_LEFT opacity 1 in 0.3
@AMARA starts idle and MIRRORTWIN starts idle

######################################################################
############### change outfit name to your 2nd OUTFIT ################
######################################################################
@MIRRORTWIN changes into MIRRORTWIN_casual

tappable
“MIRROR_STAND_BUTTON” {
@MIRRORTWIN =2
&overlay ARROW_RIGHT opacity 0 in 0.3 and overlay ARROW_LEFT opacity 0 in 0.3
@AMARA becomes MIRRORTWIN
@pause for 0.5
goto END_outfit
} “ARROW_RIGHT” {
goto outfit_3
} “ARROW_LEFT” {
goto outfit_1
}

label outfit_3
&overlay ARROW_RIGHT opacity 1 in 0.3 and overlay ARROW_LEFT opacity 1 in 0.3
@AMARA starts idle and MIRRORTWIN starts idle

######################################################################
############### change outfit name to your 3rd OUTFIT ################
######################################################################
@MIRRORTWIN changes into MIRRORTWIN_redskirt

tappable
“MIRROR_STAND_BUTTON” {
@MIRRORTWIN =3
&overlay ARROW_RIGHT opacity 0 in 0.3 and overlay ARROW_LEFT opacity 0 in 0.3
@AMARA becomes MIRRORTWIN
@pause for 0.5
goto END_outfit
} “ARROW_RIGHT” {
goto start_outfit
} “ARROW_LEFT” {
goto outfit_2
}

label END_outfit
@AMARA starts idle_headbob_neutral_loop and MIRRORTWIN starts idle_headbob_neutral_loop
@zoom on 48 0 to 300% in 0.4 THEN pause for 0.5 THEN zoom on 41 440 to 300% in 3 THEN pause for 1 THEN zoom on 41 440 to 100% in 0.4 THEN AMARA is primp_neutral and MIRRORTWIN is primp_neutral

    NARRATOR
|bold,color:royalblue|Looking good! Is this outfit your final decision?

choice
“Definitely!” {
goto Start
}

“Nope! Let’s go back, please!” {

######################################################################
######### change outfit name back to the STARTING OUTFIT #############
######################################################################
@AMARA changes into AMARA_default

if (MIRRORTWIN = 1) {
goto outfit_1
} elif (MIRRORTWIN = 2) {
goto outfit_2
} elif (MIRRORTWIN = 3) {
goto outfit_3
}}

&AMARA walks to spot 1.056 -160 152 in 2 and MIRRORTWIN walks to spot 0.965 480 198 in 2
@transition fade out in 2
goto Start

DRESSING GAME }

can someone please help?

First, Where is the label Start? I can;t find.
Second, just before the and you wrote }}, You should erase one of them.

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I think the two end brackets close to the end are closing out this choice section:

choice
“Definitely!” {
goto Start
}
“Nope! Let’s go back, please!” {

######################################################################
######### change outfit name back to the STARTING OUTFIT #############
######################################################################
@AMARA changes into AMARA_default

if (MIRRORTWIN = 1) {
goto outfit_1
} elif (MIRRORTWIN = 2) {
goto outfit_2
} elif (MIRRORTWIN = 3) {
goto outfit_3
}}

But yeah, I don’t see the Start label either. :thinking:

Oh didn;t notice :sweat_smile:

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The start label is right at the top and it still doesn’t work.

So I’m assuming that the label Start is right above EXT. BLUE - DAY with ARROW_LEFT… part.

Operating on that, the only part that looks confusing is the last section:

In here

choice
“Definitely!” {
goto Start
}

“Nope! Let’s go back, please!” {

######################################################################
######### change outfit name back to the STARTING OUTFIT #############
######################################################################
@AMARA changes into AMARA_default

if (MIRRORTWIN = 1) {
goto outfit_1
} elif (MIRRORTWIN = 2) {
goto outfit_2
} elif (MIRRORTWIN = 3) {
goto outfit_3
}}

&AMARA walks to spot 1.056 -160 152 in 2 and MIRRORTWIN walks to spot 0.965 480 198 in 2
@transition fade out in 2

goto Start

If the reader likes it and selects “Definitely!”… they return to the dressing game? Wouldn’t that leave them in an endless loop? :thinking:

There’s no way for the reader to ever see the part that I outlined in bold, the choices take them away from it (going back brings them to the selection again, and saying “Definitely” brings them to Start, no path leads to the bold part)

The skipped line between the choices is probably causing trouble too:

“Definitely!” {
goto Start
}

“Nope! Let’s go back, please!” {

Instead, go for:

}
“Nope! Let’s go back, please!” {

or

}“Nope! Let’s go back, please!” {

:thinking: Let me know if that fixes it or at least changes anything. :+1:

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