Can Someone Fix This Scene For Me

The kids Ryder & Jade are over lapping and it makes the scene look weird this is the full scene below

INT. AIRPORT BOARDING - DAY
&RYDER spot 0.881 -59 89 AND JADE spot 0.881 -59 89
@transition fade in black 3
@RYDER moves to layer 1
@JADE moves to layer 2
@JADE walks to spot 0.881 197 90 in 2 AND JADE does it while run_athletic AND RYDER walks to spot 0.881 147 89 in 2 AND RYDER does it while run_athletic
@JADE faces left AND RYDER faces left
JADE (talk_call_out)
Mommy!
@HOLLIE enters from left to upscreen left AND VICTORIA enters from left to screen left

    HOLLIE (talk_handsonhips)
You two are really fast runners.

    RYDER (talk_flex)
I know.

    VICTORIA (talk_happy_smile)
Are you two ready to see our new house?

    JADE (talk_excited)
Yes!

    RYDER (talk_excited)
Lets go now!

@VICTORIA is laugh_chuckle
@pause for a beat
@JADE walks to spot 0.881 415 90 in 2 AND JADE does it while run_athletic AND RYDER walks to spot 0.881 415 89 in 2 AND RYDER does it while run_athletic AND HOLLIE exits right AND VICTORIA exits right

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try this on the begining instead

INT. AIRPORT BOARDING - DAY
&RYDER spot 0.881 -100 89 AND JADE spot 0.881 -59 89
@transition fade in black 3
&RYDER moves to layer 10
&JADE moves to layer 11
&JADE walks to spot 0.881 254 89 in 2 AND JADE does it while run_athletic
@RYDER walks to spot 0.881 147 89 in 2 AND RYDER does it while run_athletic
@JADE faces left AND RYDER faces left
JADE (talk_call_out)
Mommy!

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