Can someone give me feedback on my first few scenes?

I just want to make sure there aren’t any spelling mistakes or coding mistakes.

I’ll give you credit at the end!

Please remember that it isn’t finished yet and there is no sound or music added yet. Thank you :slight_smile:

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…sir…or ma’am…are you kidding me??? WHAT THE ACTUAL HECK YOUR STORY IS SO FUNNY “NO MORE THOMAS”. FAV LINE EVERRRR BRUH YOUVE GOT TO BE KIDDING ME ITS SOOOOO DAMN GOOD MIND MY LANGUAGE SORRY NO SPELLING OR GRAMMATICAL ERRORS, THE BEGINNING WAS HILARIOUS AND SO WAS THE ENTIRE PLOT AND THE CUSTOMIZATION PART, TAPPABLE OVERLAYS SORRY BUT THE ONLY ADVICE IM GIVING YOU IS PLZ LEND ME SOME OF YOUR
T A L E N T
AMAZING JOBBBB <333

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Omggg I love ittt so muchhh can’t wait to read it the whole story

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omg girl thank you so much. I honestly was thinking it wasn’t that funny :new_moon_with_face:

Thank you so much tho that literally gives me so much motivation to carry on :joy::heart:

How should i credit you?

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Thank you :heart:

How should i credit you?

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Aweee :pleading_face: you can @ my insta it’s @ruhi.episode
Thank you❤️

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Haha, you don’t have to, because I didn’t do much, but my ig is @epy.izzytastic :smiley:

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will do!

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Ima still credit you. :joy:

I’ve just followed you!

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