Can someone give me feedback on my new story?

I’m new to episode writing and I want to know if there is any way I can improve my story. I have 6 episodes and I am working on the 7th. So if you can lmk.
My story is: Repeating History
By: Rose

There are a few little errors on the customization part but overall I like your story :wink: and maybe add a few pauses here and there to make your story longer, it’s a trick I’ve learnt when I was writing my story, it really impacts the duration of the episode.

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thank you so much i will start to do that <3

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