here it is:
Demitri and Elora are complete polar opposites. They have the pieces each other are missing. A perfect match right? Too bad they let their petty feud get in the way…
Honest opinions and critiques!
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I like it.
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Yaay!
sounds very interesting I like it 
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Thank you!!!
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I think that it’s very catchy! That’ll for sure get you some reads!
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Very nice! However, I would change this:
to this:
Demitri and Elora are complete polar opposites. They both are the puzzle pieces which the other needs. A perfect match, right? Too bad they let their petty feud get in the way…
Just my opinion though! No need for any huge changes 
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I’m not sure if you like this wording of that particular sentence more or not:
“They each have the pieces the other is missing.”
Overall, I like your description! (:
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Yeah, you’re right. That works better with it, thank you so much 
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No problem! 
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It does sound better but I’m thinking of putting something to do with puzzle pieces in the title, so I feel like it would sound kind of repetitive if I used it in both the summary and title. (Not sure if that makes any sense) Thank you though! 
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Awh, thanks 
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